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I think that you need to work on me more, think about me! Cecilia seems like a really shallow character so far, and so does Grey. You need to develop them a lot. And we need to hear more from Carnia, maybe go to her point of view on her wedding day and learn about the spirit items? Just putting it out there. I also want Kona's past, she seems like she would be a great background story. Also, we need more evil people, stop adding good ones. Conflict! I need conflict!
Your pesky reminder,
Grey and the rest of the novel.
P.S. Yes we called ourselves shallow.