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139,365 Literary Works • 672,540 Reviews
Stop being so confusing to write. Honestly, your characters are so confusing and complex. I have not even introduced all of them.
Crimson, stop being so angsty.
Crimson's mother, confront your daughter about reading in her diary.
Derek-Huge, stop being with Crimson's mother.
Jazz, no, you are not going to be a love interest. Stop filling Crim's thoughts with yourself.
School teacher, I have not introduced you, yet I love your teaching skills.
Sincerely,
An author trying to write.