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A place for wordsmith combatants to test their mettle. Will you be the next champion?

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TFT Round 1: Steggy vs AdrianMoon

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  1. Prompt: Good dragons.

    Word count: 2,126

    Title: Foretold

    A/N: I'm stepping in to take Alice's place!

    Spoiler
    Alvena fastened the dagger around her hip, ensuring that protection would be in place in case it would be necessary. (And it would be necessary.) Her gaze caught on her sleeping friends, who were both perfectly content in resting under the light from the pale moon. However, Alvena couldn’t rid herself of the horrible feeling gnawing away at her brain. Mist clouded over her mind and she could reach out her hands and swirl it in the air, watching as visions transpired in front of her.

    The clashing of two swords — one familiar and one distant —, fire tickling against charred armor, spilled buckets of soap, and the door to her tower left open, the lock broken. Large footsteps clear and red in contrast to the white snow on the ground. Shouting and screaming echoed in her ears, being one of the few things she had heard since she was a child. Smoke and charred flesh burned her nose.

    She leaned up against cold stone wall, closing her eyes, trying to vanish away the heavy mist before she was caught practicing witchcraft. Her movements were long and slow, not quite as fast as she needed them to be for battle. ’A princess must always have her wits about her,’ she laughed to herself, remembering that old saying from her mother. How can I have my wits about myself when I’m locked up here?

    That was really the question, since it was difficult to hone her skills when she was trapped inside of a cold tower, with only a dragon and a servant for friends. Both of them were curled up on the purple plush chair that she should have spent her days reading in, both at peace with the world and blissfully unaware about the happenings of the future. Oddly enough, Meggy and Dreda’s breathing had synchronized in a fashion, with Meggy’s chest falling as the hints of smoke emerged from Dreda’s snout.

    ”You two are so adorable,” Alvena signed, her clawed hand extending out from her as she laughed wordlessly. They were both shameless, really. It was a good thing that they weren’t there to see her teasing, otherwise Dreda’s indignant look would have sent her into a laughing fit.

    Although, worried tugged at the corners of Alvena’s mind, which caused her amusement to fade with a fast chill racing down her spine. Her 17th birthday would not go as planned, but only she and one other person knew it.

    That other person was a stranger, with a sharp sword and a wicked smile.

    Alvena did not sleep that night, not even daring to enter her chambers to feign rest. Instead, she found herself taking out her dagger to sharpen it again. She found herself lighting a lantern to retrieve her sword — “in case of emergencies” she had read — and the rest of her armor. She found herself preparing for the battle that she hoped would never come.

    -

    It did come, however. Quickly, but Alvena was ready. Her dagger was by her side and she tight plated armor that was fitted for a twelve-year-old rather than a sixteen-year-old, with her breathing somewhat restricted. Determination rang true on her face, however, as she waited for her friends to display some signs of alarm to tell her to fetch her sword and fight. A princess must always have her wits about her. She had been dreading this day since she had been locked up, but she hadn’t been certain.

    “—porridge.” Meggy signed, eyebrows furrowed and a glint of concern in her blue eyes. Her signing of slower than normal, even for someone that wasn’t fully accustomed to the language.

    Alvena shook her head, removing her hand from her side and instead signing, “Sorry, wasn’t paying attention. What?” Her own words more choppy than normal, but too many things weighed on her mind.

    Meggy repeated, “Why haven’t you eaten your porridge?” She then moved her hands down to her hips in a disapproving position, with her lips curved in apparent disapproval. It was times like those when Alvena saw Meggy as older — a motherly maid all dressed in brown with a stained apron instead of a child two years her younger.

    The silver bowl was on the floor by Alvena’s feet, still somewhat steaming but for the most part untouched. “Sorry again. I wasn’t really hungry, Meggy.” The girl’s sign name was a mash up between the mock of servant and of the genuine sign for friend, which fit Meggy quite nicely.

    Meggy nodded, understanding. Although, understanding for the wrong reasons. “Back to the courts, correct? Seventeen and back to society.”

    Alvena nodded and then leaned over to pick up the bowl, sharply noticing the constriction and pain in her ribs. Her armor hadn’t been fitted right and it honestly might have been better fitted on Meggy — even though Meggy was fifteen rather than twelve, she was still small. At least, according to Alvena’s skewed view of age. Being locked in a tower could do that to a person.

    “Dreda comes back from her daily search soon.” Dreda’s name was simply ‘small dragon’, which their companion was somewhat offended by but had learned to accept over the past five years. “Maybe you will tell a story from your books to us? I can bake cake afterward.” Meggy’s cheeks flushed and Alvena then realized for the fiftieth time that her friend hadn’t been taught how to reach as a child.

    “Of course!” Her words were falsely enthusiastic, however, as fear churned in the corner of her stomach.

    -

    Dreda came back a little after noon had passed, with wide eyes and a frantic tail that she swished about, knocking papers and tomes off of shelving. Her red scales were glittering and her snout was hot to touch. Alvena feared the worst while she waited for Meggy to translate Dreda’s English, and the worst came true. Meggy’s words were slower than before and a solemn look covered her face.

    “A knight is coming to rescue you, bringing you back to the kingdom.” Meggy looked down at her stained apron, looked back up into Alvena’s eyes and continued. “He’s about to take you away from us and we can’t stop him, he’s too powerful.” Her sign started to become shakier and shakier, until the last few lines were hard to read at all.

    “We’ll be fine,” Alvena signed stiffly, then gesturing down at the armor that she had struggle to put on, then continuing to bring attention to the sheath on her belt. “I’ll protect us.”

    She lifted her gaze, so she could see Dreda who was holed up on the chair, trying hide away from the rest of the world. It was funny, considering that her parents had found one of the finest dragon trainees in order to protect their ‘oh so poor deaf daughter who couldn’t possibly fend for herself now that she couldn’t hear’. The buying of a dragon was ridiculous, but she had gained a friend and some company to live with her in the drafty tower, so who was she to complain?

    “How?” Meggy asked, eyebrows furrowed.

    Alvena marched over to the burning fireplace and took the fire iron out of the stand, extending it out for her maid. Meggy took it, although hesitantly with worry still written all over the front of her face.

    “Skewer them,” Alvena signed.

    -

    Alvena watched as Dreda waited by the stairs, the spikes on her tail swishing back and forth in the air as she waited for the knight to arrive. The dragon looked oddly determined, with yellow eyes not once straying from her intended position. Oddly focused for such a catlike creature. Alvena debated tossing over a few feathers to see if Dreda’s attention would waver, but she wasn’t one to bet her own life like that.

    Although, the thought was amusing to entertain.

    She snapped her gaze back to Meggy, who had set down the fire iron that she had previously been twirling in her fingers. Meggy’s gaze was accusatory, “You weren’t surprised. You were expecting this. Witchcraft, correct?” Sharper than usual, faster than usual, more betrayed than usual. “Seer magic, Alvena. You didn’t want us to know?”

    Alvena’s own name was the sign for princess, combined with ‘deaf’. A crown by the ear.

    “No, no, no.” Alvena signed, “Yes and no. Witchcraft with good intentions. I also wanted you to know, Meggy. Believe me. It was sudden, I didn’t cause it—” But Meggy stopped maintaining eye contact, instead looking over to Dreda with alarm.

    He was there. Coming up the stairs. The door had been left open, with bloodstained snow left in his wake. His feet would drag up the steps, as he tried to search for his beautiful princess. If she could remember what clunking sounded like, then she would have bet that his sword did that against the steps.

    She turned around, drawing her sword and getting ready to fight. I’m not leaving here until I’m ready, she thought. And no one can make me go back to the courts. They cast me out at a moment’s notice, what would stop them from taking me back here and locking me up again? Her hands started to sweat and she was painfully aware that she had never had the ability to take up sword fighting lessons. She didn’t even have any books telling her about the technique. ‘In case of emergencies,’ was the sentence that she had read on her mother’s lips. What am I supposed to do in emergencies if I can even fight properly?

    She swallowed that back and tried to level with the sword, not even looking back at Meggy to continue the conversation. They could talk about it later, after the fight was over. They could talk about it after they had both convinced the knight to go back where he came from. They could talk about it later.

    Alvena didn’t expect the fact that the knight might be quicker on his feet than her dragon was, she didn’t expect that with wins, there would be losses. Alvena didn’t expect a sharp sword, polished armor, and someone actually young. She didn’t expect that she would be able to see his face at all, with his messy hair.

    She didn’t really expect that Dreda would be distracted, she didn’t really expect the ally to be skewered. But that happened in front of her eyes, within seconds.

    Dreda’s face had turned toward her, with eyes wide and mouth open spurting one last bit of flame. Alvena’s vision turned to dust inside of her head, no longer seeing the reality of her friend fighting by her side with glorious fire. Scales in a heap on the floor, as the girl transformed into a dragon protector would no longer be able to do her task.

    The sword twisted and then exited her friend’s neck, gleaming with blood. (Red blood trickled down red scales, spilling into an upsetting pool on the stone floor. Life spilled from a dead body, never to return. Sad, really.) The knight looked triumphant, as if he had slain a terrible beast instead of a near and dear friend. His mouth moved in an odd fashion and Alvena couldn’t figure out what he was trying to say, but she didn’t want to either.

    She wanted to stab him and then through him out of the tower, to watch as his back hit the bramble bushes below.

    Alvan couldn’t understand how it had happened so fast.

    “_ ____ _____ the beast, __ love! ___ ___ saved. _e my bride.” Only a few words here and there, with a glint of accomplishment shining through his blue eyes. He slid his sword back into his sheath, extending his hand out in what Alvena could have considered to be a friendly matter. He looked eager, young, with the entire world at his fingertips.

    She shook her head and stepped back, raising her sword to his neck.

    Only Meggy intervened just in time, going to confront the man as she had her hands balled into fists of absolute rage. The fire iron had probably been cast on the floor, forgotten about. Fists as weapons.

    Meggy started to yell, at least, Alvena suspected that. She took the distraction of her servant in order to rush over to Dreda, whose last moments had already past in the few seconds that it took the princess process everything that had transpired. The only thing Alvena could do was caress Dreda’s scales and attempt to hold back sobs.

    She didn’t know about the knight’s true intentions, but she was right, there would be a battle.
  2. Prompt: Good Dragons.

    Title: Break Your Fate

    A/N: a quick, crappy story I wrote at midnight.

    Spoiler
    She didn’t remember what happened that night. The fogging memory only seeped through the seams of her mind. It dragged the reality she longed away. The only thing that reminded her of that night was a dress. Torn and red. Bruises were lightly seen on her arm, cuts halfway in the healing stage. Her hair was knotting and torn from the edges. A small smile on her face. A distance victory in the night. Why she was smiling, she didn’t know. A small knife glinted with speckled red. A high window, glows from the summer moon outside. The girl only continues smiling, sitting on her bed with her head bowed.

    - - - -


    “Princess Ginn hasn’t been found yet, sir.”

    The king slowly lowered his head. He was overlooking a faded map. Centuries are drawings dung deep like a knife. Trees, rives. All of it was detailed. He sighed heavily, moving away from the map and started to walk to a window. The moon high in the sky with the dark abyss surrounding it.

    “Continue looking. I don’t care how long you have to look for. I’m not giving up.”

    “Of course, sir.” And the door slammed shut. A silence soon followed. The only sound that was present was the king’s own held back tears.

    “Where are you?” he whispered to the window. One hand pressed to the cool surface, he sighed and moved away from it, back to the useless map.

    - - - - - -


    Tears roll down her face, cleaning the dirt. It creates paths to something unsettling. In the prison of her mind, she tries to jump. Touching the small window. One broken hand at a time. At one point, she gives up and sits against the wall, breaking into a fit of sobs. Her hunched body is turning frail every minute that passes. The torn dress itches with blood she doesn’t remember spilling. It stings her skin like acid. Any attempt the girl tries, it ends in slipping on something wet or snapping her toe.
    She would yell from behind the bars but the only answer she was received was her own voice. She wished for someone to come get her. A princess locked in a mysterious land. A cry for help blocked out by stones. A lone hunter without a purpose. Her only enemy was herself.
    Later that night, when the summer moon is hidden behind the clouds, gruff voices ring from behind the jail cell. Luckily, she isn’t asleep but staring into the darkness. Her green eyes lost their glow, replaced with anger and sadness. She keeps the knife close to her, tucked safely in a small pocket of her dress. A key in the hole snaps her from her focus.
    When the door opens, a guard dressed in gold and red, stares hard at the girl.

    “You ready to face your fate, little girl?”

    She blinked, confused. A sudden pull to drag her to feet. Bones creak and snapped under pressure. She tried to fight back but something in her mind told her to just go. You deserve this. Silently, the guard held tight on the girl’s arm.

    Stairs and stairs later, the girl is outside, tied to a chair by rope. Her wrist itch and burn. It reminds her of the blood on her dress, but she pushes it aside. Staring down at her lap, she hears laughter around her. Fire on sticks surround her. Guards are laughing and pointing. Why do I feel used to this? Anger slowly grows in her stomach. It heals the broken bones with easy care. A rough hand on her shoulder, pushing her down again.
    Alcohol and fish breath whispers,” Don’t even think about it.” And then laughs before pushing the girl forward. Her wrist burn. Her eyes burn. Tears threatening to fall. Stay strong. For me.

    “Oh, is the little girl going to cry? How sad.” Laughter erupts in the air as a guard rolls his eyes. In his right hand is the fire while in the other is gas. “What a shame the princess is a witch.” He crackles. She frowns. A witch? She questions that night. Slowly, memories flood in causing her to flip her head up. Of course. I killed their men.

    “Have you figured it out? Or would you like a demonstration on you?”

    The girl only stared at the guard as he approached her. Please. Let me burn, she chants. I deserve it, afterall.

    - - - - -


    “Sir, we can’t find Princess Ginn. Just gi-”

    A broken bottle nearly missed the guard’s head. He gulped.

    “Don’t you dare give up,” the king snapped. “Send the dragon.”

    “But sir-”

    “Did I stutter?”

    “Yes, sir.”

    - - - - - -


    He’s angry that he was woken up from his nap to save some useless girl. Well, not so much useless as it was the king’s daughter he was saving. But still. The dragon swore through the air, flapping his heavy red wings every once in awhile. Every few times, he looked below himself to see something, anything to find the princess. He didn’t know where to look. How do you find something even if you have no hints or remembrance as to where it might be at? the dragon had thought.
    Over a certain area, he noticed, there were lights. Swooping lower, the dragon noticed these lights were made of fire and on sticks. Men in purple and brown armor were laughing, clinking beer. Humans are absolutely disgusting. Maybe that’s where the princess’s hiding.

    - - - - -


    The guard threw the last of the gas around the girl.

    “Any last words?”

    “Actually, I think it maybe best you leave her alone,” a gruff voice rang clearly in the night.


    The guard looked around. “W-who said that?” He narrowed his eyes at some of the guards surrounding him. “Did you?”

    One shook his head quickly before he pointed at the rest. They also shook their heads.

    The voice chuckled. “You silly humans. How incredibly annoying you all are.” Stepping out of the shadows, a red dragon appeared with a sly smile.

    “Now, if you don’t min-”

    He was cut off by something sharp stabbing him in the back. When he looked back slowly, a guard with a spear had stabbed him. The dragon smiled.

    “Did you do that on purpose or accident?” the dragon asked calmly. He ever so slowly pulled the spear out of his back and twirl it between his thumb and pointy claw. He looked back to the guard, who was shaking nervously and turned quickly.

    “I think you did it on purpose so what I do next is on purpose too, right?”

    The guard tasted like sweat and beer. It disgusted the dragon as he spat out the tiny armor. The rest of the guards, most of them anyway, were off and running into the woods. Some hid in the houses while the others were waiting for death, closing their eyes.

    “I’m not going to kill any of you. I’m just here for the princess. King Frea’s orders,” he blantly said. “Now, if you excuse me.” The dragon tiptoed past the guards, hoping to not step on any of them. The princess was watching the entire scene and felt stupid.

    “Why did my father send you?”

    “I’m wondering the same thing, honey.” The dragon picked up the girl from the chair and settled her on his back.
    “Ready?” he asked, looking back. The girl nodded shortly, gripping onto the dragon’s head scales.

    “A-Ahah. Do-on’t grab there. Tha-” the dragon broke into laughter. The girl grimaced, holding onto his neck instead.

    “Sorry,” she muttered.

    - - - - - -


    “And that’s the story of how I broke my mom’s precious sheep, Nickson.” The dragon finished. “And just in time! We’re here!”

    A disappointed feeling crept in the girl’s stomach.

    “I-I don’t want to go in,” the girl muttered. The dragon sighed.

    “Life’s full of ‘I don’t want to gos’. But you must remember, you must tell yourself you can do it no matter what.” The dragon paused. “I gotta write that down!” The girl jumped off the dragon, onto the ground and ran towards the front door of the castle. She looked back shortly at the dragon and smiled. The dragon only listed a claws, moving his fingers into a wave, and turned around. He flew into the night, leaving the princess unsure about herself. She didn’t know why. A dragon of all creatures saving her? It seemed almost impossible.

    - - - - - - - -


    “Is that the end, Sissie?”

    I smiled, closing the book shut. “I’m afraid so, Tucker. Now, bed time.”

    “That can’t be the ending!” Tucker whined, sitting up. “Does the girl ever see the dragon again? Does her father yell at her? Don’t leave these questions unanswered!”

    I laughed, moving back his hair and kissed his head.

    “Use your imagination, Tucker. Now go to bed.”

    “Fine,” Tucker muttered a few words after that as I left the room. I rolled my eyes, closing the door. I quickly skipped down the steps before throwing the book on the couch. I headed out the front door and into the front yard.

    “Did he finally fall asleep?” a voice asked.

    I rolled my eyes yet again. “Of course he is. Now, where are you?”

    A red dragon appears from behind my house with a bright smile. I smile back, holding my hands behind my back.

    “You wanna go flyin’?”

    “Do you even need to ask?”
  3. Both were so good! I loved Steggy's writing style, but my vote goes to AdrianMoon for such an original story which kept me interested the whole way through.
  4. I like both of these. Unfortunately, I liked Steggy's just a little less than I did Adrian's. I liked the twist at the end of Steggy's story, but I enjoyed the entire concept of Adrian's entry far more. I loved the relationship between Alvena, Dreda and Meggy. It's adorable. I also like the inclusion of a minority--a hard of hearing/deaf character. Bravo, Adrian!

    My vote goes to AdrianMoon!


i like that the title of dr jekyll and mr hyde makes a clear stance that the embodiment of one’s own evil doesn’t get a claim to the doctorate
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