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TFTT Round 1: Dracula vs Ellstar

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    Every year during the Winter they came for her, when the great river had been kissed so tenderly by the icy breeze that even his hellish breath could not move it. The body of water led them right up to the castle gate, a path, tempting them to the treasure within. His treasure, his belle, the reason he endured living. She had already been taken from him in body, her figure transformed by an evil witch, but she was his in spirit. Their hearts, their souls; they were still one. And he would never rest, not while the cold months continued kissing the earth, not while his belle was persued by selfish men. Even is the curse lasted another thousand years. He would keep fighting for her.

    Several weeks ago, when Prince Padston had leaned out of his bed-chamber window to watch the sunrise, a single orange leaf had floated into his palm. To him, it wasn't just a sign that the fires would need to be lit more frequently, or that evenings would come sooner; it was his call to arms. It was the cry for help from his damsel in distress.

    He had begun preparations immediately. Winter would soon be upon them, and with the chilly air came the certainty of a frozen river and access to the ancient castle at the end of it.

    Padston had been facinated by the stories of the ageless princess ever since he was a boy. He'd heard tales of the angel-like girl whose youth had endured for centuries. Of the beauty who waited in the castle for a brave man to rescue her from her jailer; a winged demon with fiery breath. No one had succeeded before, but no one else was Padston.

    He was of age now, the future king. It was time for him to marry, and he was determined to have the angel, the most gorgeous woman in the world whose skin was never creased by the signs of aging. Padston would slay the dragon and claim her as his bride.

    Now, with Winter at its peak, he was ready to begin travelling along the frozen river. He had his army of five thousand knights, enough food and wine to last them for months, and a convoy of servants. And not even a demon from the fiery depths of hell could defeat his ultimate weapon; an old hag he'd found in the dark alleys of the town.

    They came in the evening, the sun's rays making their armour seem like a shield of gold stretched across the entire river. The humans were becomming stronger, more determined to steal away his poor belle. Their green and black flags waved in the breeze, a mocking welcome to the dragon whose scales were of the same shade; though it did not waver his spirits. The men were but a yearly chore, a tedious thorn in his side. He would have them burned to a crisp soon enough, and then she would be safe until the next time the river froze.

    The first arrow ricocheted off his thigh, and what followed was a cacophony of metal against metal; arrow head against scale. The sound was enough to make the men cover their ears; raise their shields as a breath of fire fell upon them. To him, though, the sound matched the drizzle of the sky; it was peaceful, nothing he wasn't used to.

    A glance to the right revealed the single window of the castle, where she slept in the comforting darkness. But now the belle was there, her arm reached out to him. His flaming, red eyes met her delicate emeralds, their enduring love strengthening the two spirits. He sweeped his tail along the ground, sending armour and bodies flying towards the setting sun. Ice catapulted into the air as they landed, spearing both the dragon and the men. But to him it didn't cause pain, and the sound was only rain.

    From behind the battle line Padston watched the hellish demon fight. The creature swept his knights aside like a servant sweeping the floor; but he kept sending them. For even diamonds could be broken, if you struck them often and hard enough. And his five thousand men were surely enough.

    The princess, the unaging angel; she was there. He could see her in the window, her arms outstretched to him, begging for her freedom. Centuries she had waited, no longer would the beauty need endure the dragon's cruelty.

    Padston waved a hand over his shoulder, summoning his ultimate weapon. The hag stepped forward, her withered features framed in shadow. Padston knew she could defeat the demon, his childhood bedtimes had made him certain. The tales went that centuries ago, before even the angel had been imprisoned, a hag had killed a dragon. Now history would repeat itself, and the princess would finally be freed.

    The pain came to him suddenly, like a flash of lightning. At first it felt as if someone was reaching inside him, their hands pushing and shoving at his bones and muscles and organs, his blood vessels tangling around the impossible intruder. Then he collapsed onto the ground, the shockwave sending the army of five thousand onto their knees. He couldn't see his princess, his belle, but he knew she would be in distress. His soul was being torn out; so would her's. The pain was constantly getting worse, growing sharper, going deeper. The very things which made his being were violently twisted, changed, shifted into another plane of existence. He felt his heart thump against his chest, trying to break free. There was no human weapon which could do this. He knew the very thing which had destroyed the figure of his lover had returned, this time for him. A witch was here, and he could not defeat her.

    His belle, she was all that mattered. How could he save her now? For centuries he had lived, endured being when rest had constantly knocked at his door. But he had vowed to never rest, not so long as his love was unable to join him. She was trapped, trapped in that body the witch had given her. Stolen away from her true, winged form. Transformed into the species they dreaded. Now how could he protect her? How?

    The rain grew louder now, no longer were the knights' weapons simply ricocheting off his scales. Now they were upon him, he could feel their ant-like feet climb over his form. He felt the pain mix with the intruder's as they carved around his scales, opening him like an acorn. But it was the inside pain which was worse, he began convulsing, the sensations overcoming him. He tried to focus his eyes, to see the window one last time. But he could see nothing, nothing except a single man- a prince- and then a spear was plunged into his last good eye.

    That glorious evening would never fade from the mouth's of gossips and travellers. Prince Padston would forever be on the tongue's of men, in the history books, his name would be told to children as they drifted to sleep. He had done it. He had slain the fire demon; he had claimed his bride. And the tales were true, oh so true. She was like no woman he had ever set his eyes upon. Her hair was black as night, her eyes perfect emeralds, her lips red apples. Her body was youthful and angelic though she walked with the grace of one thousand years. And most importantly; she was his.

    They had been wed for a week now, and the feasts and celebrations had not ceased for a single minute. She was graced with every splendour of court, could want for nothing. Yet Padston knew there was something behind those shining eyes, a sliver of longing. It was in the morning of Spring when he found her. Leaning out the bed-chamber window, he watched as the river flowed softly, brushing against the fresh grass on the riverbed. There were still specks of ice through the water, Winter persisting in its existence, but a rainbow of flower petals mixed with the shards, delighting his heart. However the feeling did not last long. He should have been overjoyed to see the scattering of dragon scales floating downstream, reminders of his victory. But then he saw his princess, his angelic wife, her beautiful body laying on the ground, red with blood. And a dragon scale plunged into her heart.
  2. Narrative Poetry!

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    The man who had appeared on the tower gates was wearing a suit of armor and carrying a sword.

    Alexandria watched him from the balcony, curiously, arching a brow at the new visitor. The only things separating the two of them were a moat of lava and a set of mechanical gargoyles on the parapets, designed to attack any new face until they're told otherwise. She would need to ask his father about that later on--the amount of wiring necessary must've been incredible. "Hello, Mistah Knight," she called out from the balcony, petting the gargoyle beside her lightly. "You look a little lost there. Are you looking for an inn? Because there's one nearby 'ere, just west of this very tower."

    The man looked up, then, his blue eyes glittering in the darkening afternoon. Alexandria wasn't particularly fond of the color blue. It reminded her of the time she and her father were stuck at the bottom of the Pacific in his submarine, back in World War 2 (or was it later on in World War 2? She wasn't particularly sure about time travelling tenses.) "Good damsel," he cried out, his voice melodic enough, "How brave you seem to be in your strife! Oh, how I pity you, now--you must've been afraid enough to force yourself into forgetting fear entirely. Don't fret, now. Your troubles will be done with soon enough."

    Alexandria arched a brow. She looked back into her father's laboratory, before returning to the misguided knight. "Notta wrong you or anythin', Mistah Knight," she started, calmly, "But I have half-a-mind to say that your princess might be in the wrong castle."

    "Please don't dread, my sweet damsel," he cried back, holding his hands up to his mouth, "I've come to save you from the wretched winged demon of hell."

    She wrinkled her nose, then. The lava moat seemed to agree with her, bubbling up in laughter. It spat onto the knights' thigh, burning a part of his armor. He bounced up in shock, shrieking, landing on the moist grass. "By God!"

    Alexandria shook her head, walking back into her father's laboratory. "Papa!" she screamed into the hollowed room, sound waves bouncing off metal walls and copper machinery. A furnace sat in one corner of the room, a desk with candles in the other, the large crystal ball omitting the electricity needed for experimental tasks sitting in the middle of the room with wires sticking out. Her father was nowhere to be seen. "Pops, get up here. A fella down in front of the door just called you a winged demon."

    Silence. In the distance, she could hear the knight screaming once again, cursing outside. "For Gustav R. Kirchhoff's sake, Alex, I told you not to invite your peasant girlfriends down here," a voice from the stairwell echoed. The sound of boots against iron followed, before a white-haired man in a lab coat appeared at the top of the stairwell with a pair of lightning rods. "Little pieces of bodily excretion can't handle boiling droplets of 700 degrees Celcius, never mind Vesuvius's energy core. Can you imagine what would happen if they just drop in while I'm taking Vesuvius on a test run?" He brought his hands over his head, as if they had exploded out from his torso. "Utter disaster, I tell you."

    Alexandria waved her hand side to side, frowning. "No, no, it ain't a girl down there," she pointed at the balcony. "Some chump's down there with fancy iron plates on his chest thinkin' he gon slay somethin' and take my hand in marriage."

    Her father snapped back to her, his coal eyes wide and clear. "He said what?"

    "My dear damsel!" the knight said, on cue, his voice muffled against the interior of the tower. "Where have you gone? Has the dragon taken you once again?"

    Her father's lips went firm, and he ran his fingers through his hair, straightening his back. "Why, the nerve of--" he shook his head, marching back down the stairwell, "I swear, this is why I haven't gone back to the medieval ages for 3 millennia--"

    "Pops?" Alexandria stashed her thumbs into her suspenders, tailing her father, "Where ya going, pops?"

    "We're proving the fundamental flaws in the plate armors of the 1760's, Alex," her father screamed, "They may handle arrows, but let's see them handle the concentrated heat of the Sun."

    Alexandria slid down the spiraling stairwell, landing on her feet at the bottom. The room she had slid down to was completely bare, with the exception of several charred targets on the walls, several gargoyles, and a gigantic reptilian made of platinum metal alloys. "Pops," she started, watching as her father climbed up the creature's head, "Ya sure this isn't a little too much?"

    "Alexandria Ameliorate, you and I both know that I wouldn't waste a perfectly good core system in iron plates," he shouted.

    "You said you'd blast em' with the concentration--"

    "Listen here, they still think bleeding's a good method of healing, they don't know how hot the sun is," he screamed, jumping into the creature's open head. He looked over, glaring at his daughter. "Get back in here, lass."

    "Pops--"

    "Don't question me, I'm running a steampunk dragon!"

    Alexandria scowled, rolling her eyes. Reluctantly, she climbed up a provided ladder, jumping into the passenger seat. Her father pushed a button, closing the creature's skull. She buckled into her seat, glancing at her father. "Ya'll better not hurt the schizo," she said, "I don't want our faces in history books as the first murderers utilizing a dragon."

    "Third-degree burns will do," her father pushed the buttons at the top, "Now, be quiet and prepare for blisters. I haven't installed air conditioning in this thing."

    ...

    Prince Darius stood outside the tower walls, looking up at the balcony from before. He had heard that a dragon lurked around these corners, but he hadn't seen one as of yet. There was this strange moat of fire that could only be taken from the rivers of Hades, but that was another matter entirely. He could most likely fix that, if he brought an army and a bridge with him later on.

    "Damsel!" he screamed up at the balcony, growing impatient, "Damsel, are you still there?" Silence. "If you are, call back to me. If you aren't--"

    There was a massive roar.

    Darius unsheathed his sword, falling into battle position. He had been promised by an Avalonian witch that the sword would take down any evil creature on the face of the Earth. It said nothing about hellish machinery.

    The drawbridge burst open, and a stream of fire poured out, searching for the heavens. Darius pulled up his shield, barely eyeing his opponent. "Be gone, beast!" he screamed, after the rage of flames, "You shall terrorize the damsel no more--"

    He was shoved back, then, by metal on metal, a massive force against his shield. He dropped to the grass, finally looking up at his enemy.

    A white-haired man with twitching eyes and the damsel sat inside the brain of the creature, both of them glaring at him. The damsel only shrugged, her face an apology in itself. The white-haired man was less repentant. "Hey, Chivalry," he screamed, frowning, "Just for the record--you deserve to die in a couple of centuries, but today ain't the day."

    "Pops."

    The white-haired man looked to his daughter, before shaking his head. "Fine," he said, pulling a lever, "To the 21st century we go."

    The metal creature pulled out its wings, then, letting out a massive roar. It ran over him, gathering the momentum before jumping into the air, soaring as it disappeared into the horizon.
  3. I just realised how many errors there are in my submission. Here's an edited version if it bothers you: Untitled (Possibly: A Twisted Scale)
  4. These are both really good, but I'm afraid my vote goes to Ellstar! I felt like there was a far more interesting....idea behind it. It was a pretty close call but I liked Ellstar's just a little better. (Sorry Drac :\)


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