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Balance (draft 1.5)

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  1. Okay, so some of you (uh, when there's more than two of us in the club xD) may be familiar with my novel project from last year/early this year, Balance. Basically, what's going down is I'm giving it a major rewrite, rethinking characters and plot and all that.

    I'll probably post more woes on it in this thread at a later date, but for now, I'm kinda stuck. My main character, Jazai, was originally agender -- pronouns ce/cer/cerself. However, I've been thinking of changing Jazai to masculine, simply because of the feedback I've gotten on how I seem focused around the pronouns.

    I might change cer/him back in a later draft, but what do y'all think?


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