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I'll be back later with some yummy links.
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The Last Tribute to The Last Tribute There, that's better!
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Also second week: Across Worlds - Chapter 16 Part 1
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Third week: Across Worlds - Chapter 16 Part 2
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So I did something like six this week.... I just have to get the links. Dx
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Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 19
THIS IS SO EXCITING. Falyn is out on her own! Oh my gosh! I can hardly wait to go read the next chapter! I'm happy that we've met Phillip, and ...
Aug 20, 2014, 3:27 pm
Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 18 Part 2
Hello!!! This was rather suspenseful! I thought for sure Akia was going to be left behind, and then no one would know what to do, they'd all just feel really ...
Aug 19, 2014, 3:17 pm
Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
Re: Chapters 2 of The Token
Hey Stormcrow! I'm starting to like Simon a bit. He seems innocently troublesome, in a way. I liked his little rant that he had... I can't remember what it was ...
Aug 19, 2014, 12:26 am
Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 18 Part 1
Hello! This is probably my most favourite chapter so far! I really like that they link pinkies instead of holding hands... if they had held hands I would be scolding ...
Aug 13, 2014, 11:52 pm
Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic
Re: Morning Routine
Hey there! Welcome to YWS by the way!!! Mind if I give you a review? OK, so this was full of a lot of typical teenage frustration... I like that. ...
Aug 13, 2014, 6:50 pm
Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 17 Part 2
Hey Noelle! I like this. The whole 'who has to sacrifice themselves' thing is always a good way to figure out who is on your side, and who is not. ...
Aug 11, 2014, 12:43 am
Short Story » Realistic, General
Re: On the streets
Hello there! This was a very thoughtful short story, and in that I mean that it was very thought provoking. My mind is racing, and I am interested to know ...
Aug 7, 2014, 4:49 pm
Short Story » General, Dramatic
Re: Drive All Night
Hello! That was an interesting ending I suppose. I found it very easy to understand what your character was feeling, there's a lo of emotion in the way you describe ...
Aug 5, 2014, 4:58 pm
Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy
Re: Battle Arena 1; Exiting Short Story: So, What Would You Do for Magic?
Hey! I've come.
I actually enjoyed reading this a lot. I like the whole idea, plot, everything! The thing I thought was in a way refreshing was that it ...
Jul 30, 2014, 7:29 pm
Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic
Re: Sky
Hey there! I really like the concept of the sky and the earth having a romance... it's sweet. I also really like this last bit: by the Sky's cascading tears. ...
Jul 30, 2014, 3:43 pm
Poetry » Romantic, Narrative
Re: Damon
Hey! This was well put together, I think. The rhymes were pretty good; I know normally in poems there's at least one time where there's one of those 'almost' rhymed ...
Jul 30, 2014, 12:43 am
Poetry » General, General
Re: spoken word poem (work in progress)
Hello there! That was a little random, but I enjoyed myself. You have a real free flow about your writing, it kind of entranced me for a bit. I was ...
Jul 30, 2014, 12:21 am
Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative
Re: you wont like me when you wake
Hello! I don't understand this poem, but nonetheless I like it. It has a soft, raw feel to it, and I can't explain it better than that. I wanted to ...
Jul 29, 2014, 11:32 pm
Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 17 Part 1
Hey! Nice cliff hanger, jeez. Now I have to wait.
( it was lovely though ) There's just one thing that I noticed that is a bit bothersome. Sam ...
Jul 29, 2014, 11:06 pm -
That's a bit confusing. ^^ That's 14 reviews.... I copied and pasted. ^.^ If the links are needed... I guess I can get those. If they're needed.
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