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Thu Dec 13, 2012 9:01 am
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Lycando says...



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Please review this thanks! :)
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Thu Dec 13, 2012 3:44 pm
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Clarity says...



Lyca, once I have done Shu's I will do this!
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Fri Dec 14, 2012 9:41 pm
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I have done your review Lyca!
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Sat Dec 15, 2012 4:56 am
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Lycando says...



Hey there! Thanks for the review! :) Here's another one if you don't mind, it's a continuation from the first one. Actually it's the third part.

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Sat Dec 15, 2012 12:42 pm
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Clarity says...



Done, hope I helped! :D
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Sat Dec 15, 2012 5:41 pm
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crossroads says...



Hi!
Though it will probably have to wait till tomorrow, as I'm really busy this evening, I'll review them for you too, you deserved it ^_^
Last edited by crossroads on Sat Dec 15, 2012 11:22 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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literary fantasy with a fairytale flavour
  





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Sat Dec 15, 2012 6:01 pm
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Clarity says...



Aria.... what do you mean?
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Sat Dec 15, 2012 7:43 pm
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crossroads says...



@Clarity ~ For some reason, perhaps because I'm writing on my phone, half of my post turned up deleted *telling myself I'm an idiot for not checking it*

so, here I go again:
"Hey, Clarity! I've read some of your reviews, and thought of contacting you.. Could you review one or both of my writing? One is called "Reminiscence - the novel", and the other "The Apprentice's Tale".. They're both under "Novels/Chapters" section.. I got some reviews already, but I always like to hear as much opinions as I can.. Thanks in advance :)

I apologise for saying it in you topic, but I see his here, so.. @Lycando ~ Hi!
*what's written in my post above ^^* "

And that's what it was supposed to be.. So sorry for the confusion, and for the taking over to talk to Ly :s

Aria
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Sat Dec 15, 2012 9:26 pm
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Clarity says...



Okay, could you post the links to them please?
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Sat Dec 15, 2012 11:28 pm
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Clarity wrote:Okay, could you post the links to them please?


Here you go:
Reminiscence ~ http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=98272
and The Apprentice's Tale ~ http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=98309

Thanks again ^_^
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Sun Dec 16, 2012 12:08 am
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Clarity says...



I'll do them as soon as I get the time! And no problem :)
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Sun Dec 16, 2012 2:39 pm
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Lycando says...



Clarity oh Clarity, I find myself here again :P

Hope you don't mind, here's part four of Destiny

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Sun Dec 16, 2012 9:55 pm
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Clarity says...



Aria, I will try to have them done by the 22nd and Lyca, as soon as I have Aria's done, I'll get yours done. It should be done by 24th.
:D
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musingsmutterings says...



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New here. I would love a review of any sort!
  








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