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Mon Jun 18, 2012 2:49 pm
PixieStix says...



Hey I'm Pix and I've been on YWS for a..pretty long time. To be honest, I think reviewing is fun so I'm up for it. :D

The things I review:

-Poems
-Lyrics
-Short stories ( Fantasy, Romance, Action/adventure.)
-Chapter works (Same as short stories ^)

Please feel free to request a review here, or you can post the link on my wall and I'll get right to it! The longest it'll take me to review will be two days max. I usually get it done right away. So, post you're link here or on my wall!

~Pixie
Last edited by PixieStix on Sat Oct 13, 2012 1:57 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Mon Jun 18, 2012 7:42 pm
youngwriter says...



Hiyaa:) OK here's my poem :
work.php?id=94616#comments

and please can you not say anything about the layout? Basically I set it out properly, but it changed it, so after every comma should be a new line, after every full stop should be a new stanza...
Thankss:)
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Mon Jun 18, 2012 10:59 pm
PixieStix says...



No problem. : )
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Tue Jul 03, 2012 2:06 am
TheAceofAll says...



Hey could u review the first few chapters of my book Welcome to Orba Nova? I just finnished rewriting the first chapters and could use a good review :)
work.php?id=96135
Thanks :D
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Tue Jul 03, 2012 2:29 am
PixieStix says...



Sure! I might not be able to do it soon though...Not much Internet connection. But I'll try!
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Fri Jul 06, 2012 8:34 pm
misshayleeelizabeth says...



Hi, I am new here... I would love for you to review my story.. Here is the link: work.php?id=96290 I would love the feed back you could give me. Let know what i can do better and what i am good at.. Thank you so much
  





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Sun Jul 08, 2012 2:25 am
PixieStix says...



Sure! I'll do it when I can get on a computer.
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Mon Jul 09, 2012 2:55 am
davidechoe13 says...



work.php?id=96313

Thanks if you do i would appreciate it.
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Mon Jul 09, 2012 6:30 pm
PixieStix says...



Again, I can't get on a laptop. I'll try to do it tommarow. :D
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Tue Jul 10, 2012 7:01 am
SpeedyPencil says...



could you please review this?: work.php?id=96348 thankyou so much! I appreciate it!
Scissors cuts paper, paper covers rock, rock crushes lizard, lizard poisons Spock, Spock smashes scissors, scissors decapitates lizard, lizard eats paper, paper disproves Spock, Spock vaporizes rock, and as it always has, rock crushes scissors.
  





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Tue Jul 10, 2012 9:56 am
Nerosns says...



Unsure if you still answer to this thread! But...

work.php?id=96320

I'd appreciate it something hardcore :)
  





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Tue Jul 10, 2012 2:16 pm
PixieStix says...



Sure.

But...Narosns, the link doesn't work. Do you mind trying it again?
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Tue Jul 10, 2012 9:52 pm
PixieStix says...



All reviews are done! Another shipment is welcome!
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Tue Jul 10, 2012 9:55 pm
Nerosns says...



work.php?id=96320

Sorry about the broken link before hopefully this one serves it's purpose : D
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Wed Jul 11, 2012 1:42 pm
PixieStix says...



It's fine! I will get this review done now. :)
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If it wasn't for poetry, I couldn't express myself.
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