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Gender: Male
Points: 1257
Reviews: 14
Sun Jun 03, 2012 9:12 am
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SirTobes says...



ever since the points came back, I've been questing to get more then my one meagre star. Ever since I was born, I've been questing to help those who are less fortunate.
Hence, I give you; Sir Tobes' Reviews for the Reviewless.
For those with no Reviews...

Spoiler! :
What I shall review-
I shall review-
1. Short Story.
2. Novels
3. Action/Adventure
4. Comedy
5. Sci fi/Fantasy
6. Horror
7. Mystery
8. Poetry
9. Fanfic (If i've read it/seen it etc.)
9. Lyric
10. Script
11.Romance
Everything and anything!

-I will not review you if you have two or more legitimate reviews-

My review styles-
Spoiler! :
1. The Basics- A quick overall summary of everything good/bad about your piece. Includes grammar/spelling check.

2. The Star Rating- A simple review, including your idea, how you presented it, a grammar/spelling check and an overall summary. I will put stars to each of these. ex. ****/*****

3. The Kiss and Cuddle- I'll smother you with and happiness, while still giving constructive criticism, then I'll send it off with a little pink bow!

4. House of Pain- Prepare to be killed. I'll rip your piece to shreds while still offering good advice.

5. The Mess- I will wrap up all of the above styles into one big pile of reviewness.

6. The chooose your own adventure!- You choose what you want in your review!

Request Template-
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[b]Name of Piece:[/b]
[b]Genre:[/b]
[b]Link:[/b]
[b]Review Style:[/b]

Requested so far-
Spoiler! :

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There is no such thing as a stranger. Only friends we haven't met yet.

Previously Just Toby

  





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80 Reviews


Gender: Female
Points: 333
Reviews: 80
Mon Aug 27, 2012 4:41 pm
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polinkacreations says...



Hey SirTobes;)

Name of Piece: Callyptica (Prologue)
Genre: Science Fiction/Fantasy
Link: work.php?id=97080
Review Style: 5 - The Mess

PS. The novel is not yet complete, but I can assure you that it's in progress. If you have the time/patience/enthusiasm to continue reading and reviewing the novel, that would be great! (Prologue, Chapters 1+2 have no reviews yet.)
Thanks in advance! x
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." - Dr. Seuss
  





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Points: 2806
Reviews: 935
Wed Aug 29, 2012 5:52 pm
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Shady says...



Dear Sir,

I think it is a wonderful charity that you're running for us poor, reviewless writers. :pirate3:

Name of Piece: Chapter Three (unnamed)- two parts

Genre: Fantasy- Action/Adventure

Links: Part one is here: www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97113
And
Part two is here: www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97115

My work may or may not make sense without having read the former chapters, and so I shall provide you with links for the prologue-chapter two:
www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95999
www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=96633
though they don't qualify for reviews. :D

Review Style:5- The Mess, focusing more on House of Pain, less on Kiss and Cuddle. :smt003

Thanks so much!

~Shady

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
[they/he]
  





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Points: 270
Reviews: 18
Tue Sep 04, 2012 10:54 pm
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shulchan says...



Name of Piece: Boring Old Me
Genre: Realistic/Dramatic
Link: /work.php?id=97241
Review Style: 5 - The Mess

Please be as harsh as possible!
  





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Gender: Female
Points: 924
Reviews: 4
Wed Sep 05, 2012 1:11 am
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chazbc4 says...



Name of Piece: Gauloise
Genre: General fiction
Link: work.php?id=97245
Review Style: The Mess sounds good.

Thanks a lot :) It's pretty long, and there will definitely be a host of mistakes as it's unfinished and unedited, but an opinion would be great.
  





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Points: 42428
Reviews: 411
Thu Sep 06, 2012 9:28 am
BenFranks says...



Name of Piece: La Mercz: L' Invasion de Paree I/II
Genre: Comedy Action Adventure
Link: work.php?id=97255
Review Style: As thorough as you can make it dear boy.

Thank you.
  





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Points: 358
Reviews: 67
Fri Sep 14, 2012 11:02 am
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cm57105 says...



Name of Piece: Alyasan Chapter 2
Genre: Fantasy
Link:

Chapter 2:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97342

If you want chapter 1 search up; Alyasan chapter 1

Review Style: The mess or house of pain…
If you don't have a trophy case that spins into a secret room with a press of a button, then your an idiot.

Need a review? You've come to the right person.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&p=1143828#p1143828
  








"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
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