Young Writers Society

I'll review anything, though I specialize in fiction. If you're after a certain flavor of review (nitpicks, for example), go ahead and specify in your reply.

My reviews are notoriously candid, so if you're brave enough to request one, be prepared.

-Kafka

Hey Kafka,
I'm not sure you're up for this, but could you take a look at the first two chapters of a novel I have done. If you can't, don't sweat it.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=1108

Thanks in advance!
-Alex

Done! Any more?

If you feel like it, could you please review mine? It doesn't really fit in any of your genres, it's kind of a modern day thriller, but I like all the reviews I can get. Thank you either way!

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It has been done.

Hey, can you take a quick look at this? Does not need an in-depth grammar analysis/thematic analysis or whatever.

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Thanks alot.

Lena

Hey Kafka! Could you please take a look at this?
It would be much appreciated.


Thanks!

Done X 2.

Hiiii there.
It's me again.
Could you please take a look at this?
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Thanks!

Hey Kafka. (: Would you mind taking a look at my piece in fantasy fiction? Little Macey. Thank you very much. (:

Hey Kafka, I was wondering if you'd perhaps have time to review my edited prologue/chapter one? Its the start of a fantasy novel. If you have time, thank you much!

Hello! Might you be able to review We All Are Birds.? It's kind of long, I apologize. Also it's more of a realistic fiction, (a story of adolescence, rebellion, and teenage angst)...but I really would love to have your critical analysis/review on it.

Pretty pwease?

Thanks
-Once

All four reviews have been finished. Keep 'em coming....

RAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWR

Thanks. c:

Hey Kafka, again thank you so much for your fantastic critique.

Do you think you could possibly review these two:
Chapter 2
Chapter 3

Thanks again,
-Once