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Mon Feb 14, 2011 1:40 am
Kafkaescence says...



If the idea of getting a review from me excites and arouses you, be aware that I will only review literary works that have been well-proofread. I don't have time to walk you through your English troubles.
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Mon Feb 14, 2011 2:17 am
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322sivart says...



Hey Kafka,
I'm not sure you're up for this, but could you take a look at the first two chapters of a novel I have done. If you can't, don't sweat it.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=1108

Thanks in advance!
-Alex
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic76104.html




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Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:25 am
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rolf18 says...



If you feel like it, could you please review mine? It doesn't really fit in any of your genres, it's kind of a modern day thriller, but I like all the reviews I can get. Thank you either way!

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Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:34 am
Lena.Wooldridge says...



Hey, can you take a quick look at this? Does not need an in-depth grammar analysis/thematic analysis or whatever.

topic76309.html

Thanks alot.

Lena
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Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:14 pm
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Persy says...



Hey Kafka! Could you please take a look at this?
It would be much appreciated. :)


Thanks!




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Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:53 am
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Persy says...



Hiiii there.
It's me again. :)
Could you please take a look at this?
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Mon Feb 28, 2011 6:29 pm
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EmmaJane says...



Hey Kafka. (: Would you mind taking a look at my piece in fantasy fiction? Little Macey. Thank you very much. (:
Your = Possession. Your shoes are so sweet!
You're = Omission. You're quite strange...

If you are confused about which to put, simply say in your mind "you are" and see if that fits the sentence. If not, you are looking for your.

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Mon Feb 28, 2011 8:47 pm
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Tayler says...



Hey Kafka, I was wondering if you'd perhaps have time to review my edited prologue/chapter one? Its the start of a fantasy novel. :) If you have time, thank you much!




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Thu Mar 03, 2011 12:37 am
onceuponatim3xo says...



Hello! Might you be able to review We All Are Birds.? It's kind of long, I apologize. Also it's more of a realistic fiction, (a story of adolescence, rebellion, and teenage angst)...but I really would love to have your critical analysis/review on it.

Pretty pwease?

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Sun Mar 06, 2011 2:44 am
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Kafkaescence says...



All four reviews have been finished. Keep 'em coming....
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Sun Mar 06, 2011 6:33 pm
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onceuponatim3xo says...



Hey Kafka, again thank you so much for your fantastic critique.

Do you think you could possibly review these two:
Chapter 2
Chapter 3

Thanks again,
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