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Tue Apr 26, 2011 7:12 pm
Twit says...



If you could review Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 of March Hare, please, I'd be very grateful. :)
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Wed Apr 27, 2011 4:29 am
HostofHorus says...



Dear Isha,

I couldn't help but notice your pretty badges! As such, I would be much obliged to receive a review from you!

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And then if you want to, I wouldn't mind one on this little piece of satire about Justin Bieber.... But it is up to you, you don't have to do this one. It is rated 16+ because it does have a little imagery.... hehe....

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Wed Apr 27, 2011 8:29 pm
JJxVoodo says...



Hey, I'm new so please do NOT go easy on me :wink:

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It's only Chapter one. Thank-you :D

xxx JJxVoodo xxx
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Thu Apr 28, 2011 2:38 pm
eldEr says...



All of those are done.
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?
  





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Fri Apr 29, 2011 10:14 pm
bluewaterlily says...



Ish when you have the time could you review my two poems? Thanks.

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Sat Apr 30, 2011 3:33 pm
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Hello, you said you review novels so I was wondering if you could please review the first three chapters of my fantasy novel? I think they're fairly grammically (is that a word?) sound, I just need to know what people think of it. Just make sure you open up the attachment for the first three chapters- otherwise you'll be looking at a very long manuscript. Thanks in advance, and take your time, as its kind of long, I'm in no rush! Thanks again!

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Sun May 01, 2011 12:27 am
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eldEr says...



Done.
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?
  





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Sun May 01, 2011 1:51 am
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yea sorry you couldn't open the attachment as that's what I needed reviewed, I haven't put any time into the synopsis so trust me I know it sucks. But thank you for trying. :)
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Tue May 03, 2011 8:16 pm
Kagi says...



Mind reviewing my first half decent thing I've written since writers block?
Always appreciated.Isha. Psha. Poo.

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Tue May 03, 2011 11:01 pm
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Please and thank you!
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Tue May 03, 2011 11:20 pm
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I'd appreciate it ever so much! topic80364.html
NaPoWriMo Count: 6 poems (only started on the 14th :P)
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Wed May 04, 2011 2:19 am
eldEr says...



Done, done and done!
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?
  





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Wed May 04, 2011 2:22 am
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HAI HAI ISHY LOVE CAN ME GETS REVIEW PWEASE?! :D Thanks! Also: If you'se like it, press the like button please! :D
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Thu May 05, 2011 4:52 pm
eldEr says...



Done. ^^
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?
  





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Fri May 06, 2011 11:34 am
MiRaCLeS says...



Any chance you could do this for me?
Any criticism you have would be much appreciated. :)
  








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