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Thu Jan 20, 2011 8:20 pm
Spitfire says...



Oh yes! You heard me! Spitfire's on sale!

But not in the way you think; I'm not selling myself, only my services. Which ones? you might ask. Well as a reviewer, of course 8)
And what does it cost you? Nothing! Isn't that great! (don't worry, I'm not going to become a sales person; it's just not my thing)

Seriously though, I love to review. Mostly, I love to plunge myself into a good story. The thrill of fights and the unknown are what I love most :D

So what do I review? Fantasy, Sci-fi and General Fiction --> short story and novel

Having said that, if you wish me to review something of yours, know that I speak my mind to the fullest. If I like or dislike something, I will tell you. Do not take it personnally; I'm just trying to help you out as much as possible. And it would be nice to know afterwards if I've helped or not :)

Here are some reviews I've done, for those who have never seen anything of mine:
post810374.html#p810374
post809023.html#p809023
post808887.html#p808887

If you still want me to review your work, just ask and post the link. Oh and if you have another genre than fantasy but it's only to check the plot or such things.. well I can make exeptions ;)
Looking forward to reviewing :D

PS: I'm going to college, so if I don't review your work right away, don't worry, I'll be getting to it :)
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Thu Jan 20, 2011 9:50 pm
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post750554.html#p750554

Here's a little something of mine, Suz, that can use some TLC. Or Tough Loving Comments. I haven't thought about this story in a while, but I think I have two chapters posted. There's a bunch more where those came from if you like what you read. It's kind of a cliche story, but I like it all the same. It was the first thing I ever really wrote. You know? Anyway, have at it.

Many Thanks!
Bailey
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Fri Jan 21, 2011 11:27 pm
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All right Bailey, both chapters have been done ;)
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Mon Jan 24, 2011 2:45 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hey there, Fire. Could you review this? I'd love an opinion on it.

Please and thanks! <3
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Mon Jan 24, 2011 2:48 pm
Azila says...



Heya, Spitfire! I've heard great things about you, so I thought I'd request a review from you!

This piece is posted in Sci-Fi, but I was this close to posting it in Fantasy, so hopefully you'll like it. ^_~

Thanks in advance!




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Mon Jan 24, 2011 4:37 pm
Ranger Hawk says...



Yay! Could you review this for me please? Thanks! :D
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Tue Jan 25, 2011 2:49 am
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Shrubbery, Azila and RH; done! Hope I helped :)
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Tue Jan 25, 2011 4:18 pm
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Definitely, thanks! If you feel like it, I posted the second part to the story you just reviewed... :)
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Tue Jan 25, 2011 4:58 pm
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Would you review that for me, Susie? ^^ It's the beginning of my general fiction novel, if that's okay.

It's already got a billion and one reviews, but I'm trying to get it as good as I can for a contest I'm entering, so every review counts. Please and thank you!
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Wed Jan 26, 2011 10:58 pm
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Sorry it took me awhile, but RH and Skinsy = done :)
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Thu Jan 27, 2011 3:14 am
borntobeawriter says...



Baby girl, would you please check this out for me? post813789.html#p813789 I wasn't going to ask because you have read it, but no one else is commenting. *bites lip*
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Thu Jan 27, 2011 10:55 pm
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic75487.html
Here's the link to my latest post. You might like it. It's called Super Duper (but any alternate titles that might pop into your head would be nice.) It's about a girl who (cliche alert!) has super powers and her fight to take down the Man. It's pretty funny, if I'm any judge, but if you feel like giving it a thorough check, I'd be much appreciated. I know it's a bit out of your fantasy preference.

Thanks!
Bailey
After all, it is the pen that gives power to the mythical sword.

"For an Assistant Pig-Keeper, I think you're quite remarkable." Eilonwy

"You also shall be Psyche."

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Sat Jan 29, 2011 3:42 am
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Tanya and Bailey, done :)

And Bailey, action/adventure is okay with me. The reason I don't put too many genres is because I don't want people coming to me with all these different genres. Like poetry and historical are soooo not my thing. I suck at poetry and history is so boring to me, so I'd be useless in those ;)
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Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:35 pm
EmmaJane says...



Sooooozzeee! Or Susie, whichever. 8) I would like to request a review .... please. I've posted a new work: Little Macey. 'Tis Fantasy. ;] I hope you like it. ...I could also bribe you with pancakes? Or cookies? Which would you prefer? ;]
Your = Possession. Your shoes are so sweet!
You're = Omission. You're quite strange...

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Tue Mar 01, 2011 4:10 am
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You can call me whichever; I've had so many nicknames that I just go with the flow :wink:
Oh and your review's done :)
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