Young Writers Society

Hello dear,

How are you? We haven't chatted in yonks.

But if you don't mind, or have the time I'd love one of your special reviews please. Thats if you can.

Here you are;
The Sniper

Please and thanks in advance.

*Huggles*

Hey, Tanya!

When you get the time and when Skinsy junior isn't beating up your insides too badly, could you review this for me, please? I've just given it an edit, so I'd like to know if it's tweaked a bit better now. Thanks!

hai Mom!
I need a review (a really good grammar one) and I thought of you!
Its for a contest, so make sure to be EXTRA harsh

Thanks!
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Hello Tanya...

We haven't chatted in ageeees. How are you? With the pregnancy and all? We'll deff. need pictures soon!
So if you can fit this into your busy schedule I'd be so thankful.

It's kind of a personal piece so I'm rather fond of it but rip it to shreds if you need too

Thanks!
Kagi <3

Take a look at my book's prologue viewtopic.php?t=79503 and first chapter viewtopic.php?t=82256
Thanks.

Please can you review my first chapter viewtopic.php?t=82190

Drama, Kagi, sorry I'm getting to this so late but for some reason I didn't get the notifications. I see you already had plenty of great reviews and I'm not sure what I could add. If you really want me to look it over again, let me know.

Mrawesome and Chelsea, done!

Mommy! I miss you! <3

Will you please review my short story?



Thanks a bunch. I'll try to be good from now on. >:3

Yo! When you have some free time in your busy schedule, could you review this for me? ^_^

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Please and thank you!

Yuri, Skinsy, done!

Heyyyy buddy =] I have this novel that I'm trying to get different perspectives on. Would you mind reviewing it for me? Its a pretty quick read at this point, only ten chapters have been posted. I would really appreciate it! =] Here's the link for chapter one.=]http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=83032

I was flicking through the last couple of pages and I seem to be stalking your thread a little bit. All I'm saying is that you must do special reviews or sumfing 'cause I keep coming back for more!

I wrote this for Ranger's competition under the influence of the emotion love and if you don't mind, I'd love a look.

Whatevwer works,

Huggles and baby wishes (again)
Kagi xx

'Suuuuuuuuuuuuuuup!?!?! Hidere, Tanya and Liam (omgsuchanawesomename.Iknewit.Ikneeeeweeet).

I always feel really smug when I get the chance to post here because it's hard to request when you pounce on pieces of writing so quickly like a powerful magician lady.

Would you be ever so kind and review the next part of Stop and Stare for me, please? When you have the time, of course. I'm kind of paranoid about some of it, so maybe your awesomeness could shine some light on how to fix some things.

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Please and thank you, as always!

Skinsy, Kagi: Done!

Thanks for the requests, guys!

Hello I reviewed "Mama, Wake Up" and thought it was amazing! Extremely powerful. If you wouldn't mind, could you review my story "Caffeinated Epiphanies"? Here's the link to it: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=85178 It falls under the General Short Fiction category. Thanks in advance!

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