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Wed Oct 18, 2017 5:58 pm
LizzieH3 says...



Can you review my poem The Worry Child ? I'm looking for ways to improve the poem but also improve my general writing skills. Thanks
  





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Sat Oct 21, 2017 2:17 am
Samk642 says...



Working on an novel. Would you review the latest chapter? It is a Sci-Fi. The Darknesses Resurgence Chapter 4
  





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Sun Oct 22, 2017 12:08 am
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Kale says...



Done and done!
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  





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Tue Oct 31, 2017 10:10 pm
Lumi says...



all you need (is the ever-breaking heart)

I bought you a strop to help.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Thu Jan 18, 2018 12:50 am
Kale says...



Done with Lumi's.

Need to finish this one: The Teal Knight
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  








Daddy Long Legs are more closely related to crabs than spiders and somehow the idea of crablike creatures with spider legs that have escaped the entrappings of the primordial sea and now crawl over land and can walk up and down walls and ceilings creeps me more than I can adequately describe.
— Snoink