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Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?



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Thu Apr 29, 2010 4:03 pm
Sins says...



I've done yours curiousvampire!

Anyone else want a review? 8)
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Fri Apr 30, 2010 11:42 am
NinjaCookieMonster says...



May I has a review on the following?


topic62439.html


topic61477.html


topic61860.html


topic62196.html


topic62438.html


In order, that would be: Gabriel (an excerpt) and the Rain, Summer, and Ice Cream series thus far. Sorry for the long links, I haven't quite figured out how to make them smaller.
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Fri Apr 30, 2010 6:02 pm
Sins says...



I've done the first two, I'll get on to the rest as soon as possible! :)
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Fri Apr 30, 2010 9:08 pm
Sins says...



Viola! I've finished yours now ninja!

Anyone else fancy a review...?
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Sat May 01, 2010 9:15 am
Yuriiko says...



Hello there!

Can you review mine too?

Title: Only Hope
Genre: Romantic Short Story
Link: topic62654.html

Thank you!
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Sat May 01, 2010 10:36 am
Sins says...



I've finished yours Yuriiko!

Next...? :xd:
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Sat May 01, 2010 6:45 pm
jolene says...



Hi can u review my romance novel please?

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Sat May 01, 2010 7:38 pm
Sins says...



Done jolene!

Anyone else hungry to be reviewed...? :elephant:
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Sun May 02, 2010 3:22 pm
Lalaland says...



Thanks for asking Elinor Bryn to review my story. I appreciate it.

:)
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Sun May 02, 2010 8:34 pm
ScarletteRose says...



Hey Skins!

I would like a review. It's a romantic short story.

Link: viewtopic.php?t=62957

Thanks so much!
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Sun May 02, 2010 9:34 pm
Sins says...



Yours is done Scarlette!

I enjoyed reading it. :D

Anyone else...?
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Sun May 02, 2010 11:18 pm
Razcoon says...



Please review Dollhouse, a general fiction novel? About...dolls. Sort of.
Ch. 1:
topic62172.html
Ch. 2:
topic62581.html
Ch. 3:
topic62945.html

And mind telling me how to make the words a link? Sorry, kinda new here. Only been here a month.
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Mon May 03, 2010 1:03 am
BondGirl007 says...



Hey Skins :D Do you think you could review this for me? Thanks!

topic62992.html
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Mon May 03, 2010 3:11 am
ultraviolet says...



Hi!

Would you mind reviewing the first two parts to this story I'm writing? It's called "My life as a human dreamcatcher." I'm currently working on the third. Thanks!

Part 1: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic62089.html

Part 2: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post692069.html#p692069

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Mon May 03, 2010 8:38 am
ArcticMonkey says...



Hey, can I request something for someone else? I think you'd like it! Here's the link:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post698318.html#p698318
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