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Thu Apr 01, 2010 4:57 pm
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Lava says...



Drop some requests through the crater.
Not accepting, if 'Dormant.'


I will review :

I would love to do any Art & Photography piece.
And fiction, I will be happy to review Sci-fic, Romance, Other. I wouldn’t mind Fantasy and Action/Adventure.
Non-fiction : Well, it depends. But do post your link here, I’ll definitely say something about it.

This volcano will not consider :


Poetry (Any kind. Trust me, you do not want my reviews on poetry.)
Chapters (Well, as long as it’s the first, it’s fine. Don’t tell me to review chapter 5.)
Fanfiction. (I’m a fan of fanfics, but I just won’t review them.)
Advanced Critiques. (Sorry, I just don't have enough time.)


Art/ Photography : I will look for visual appeal, flow, style, my perceptions, lighting, editing and other errors. Do resize your pictures before putting it up. Please?


Fiction :If you want me to look at something in particular, you can ask. If you need help with grammar, I'd be happy to help out.
Otherwise, I'd go about commenting on the story, description and a few nitpicks(I just can't seem to not point them out)



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Well, I guess that’s it. So go ahead, post your links below.


~Lava
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Sun Apr 04, 2010 3:07 am
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Kaedee says...



Hey! Could you critique my artwork? It's a portrait, mainly focused on the girl's hair. Thanks, Lava. http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post683123.html#p683123
~KD
(Love it...'Lava's Volcano'...:) ) Btw, my artwork is resized.
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KD.

Thanks for the request. It's done (I hope it's the right picture.)

Any one else?
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Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:28 pm
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MiaParamore says...



Hi Lava. Thanks for reviewing that day. i8 wnat a review for my chapter-3 of a criminal's Heart. Thanks.
A criminal's heart chapter-3
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Tue Apr 06, 2010 12:09 am
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Jas says...



Hey could you do this? Thanks! http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post684136.html#p684136
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but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Tue Apr 06, 2010 3:47 pm
Lava says...



Jasmine, Shubhi Done!

Any more requests?
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Fri Apr 09, 2010 6:39 pm
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Skins says...



Hey Lava :)

Could you please review my fiction?

Can You See Me?

It's chapter two and I know you said you don't want to do any chapters, but I could do with some help on it! If you feel like you need to, the link for chapter one of it is in the post.

Thanks in advance

xoxo Skins
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Sun Apr 11, 2010 9:48 am
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Hello.
Please will you review the first part of my short story? It's called 'The Man In the Top Hat/Emilie's Diary - Part One' and you can find it here: post687280.html
If you would like me to review something of yours in return let me know!
Thanks in advance,
Sophie
If you would like a review, please visit my review shop: topic61400.html :)




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Tue Apr 13, 2010 12:20 pm
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Hi, a short fast novella for you attention. If it sucks you in it's fast that is. If you can't go past the first few pages, that's OK too, just try to explain why please:)
topic61868.html
she got a dazed impression of a whirling chaos in which steel flashed and hacked, arms tossed, snarling faces appeared and vanished, and straining bodies collided, rebounded, locked and mingled in a devil's dance of madness.
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Wed Apr 14, 2010 6:48 pm
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Skins says...



Hey! It's me again! (Not that I'm stalking you...) :xd:

I'm not sure if you do advanced critiques, but will you review my novella? It's literally only 20 something pages long, so it's pretty short!

If not, that's fine.

The Beauty In Ugly

Thanks!

xoxo Skins
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 12:29 pm
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Lava says...



Hey Napalm and Skins.
Sorry, I should've mentioned I don't do Advanced Crits.
Really sorry. I just don't have enough time.

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Sat Apr 17, 2010 10:32 pm
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Hey Lava,
I'd really like a review for the 2nd chapter of my action/adventure story. It's got swearing in it so I hope you don't mind, if that is a problem then don't worry.
Here's the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic62053.html
The link for the first chapter is at the end in case you wanna know what happened in the beginning.
Thanks!
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 10:52 pm
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Winterblossoms says...



Hey there, I would like a review on this :3

viewtopic.php?t=62029

It's the second chapter, but I don't think it's necessary to read the first to understand it... it's as good as a stand-alone itself. :) Thank you.
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Mon Apr 26, 2010 9:33 am
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Lava says...



Okay, so anyone need something reviewed?
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Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

sachi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.





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Mon Apr 26, 2010 10:08 pm
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WritingWords says...



Hi, please review this! I am a beginning writer! Thanks!
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