Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!
Hey Write!
I was hoping you could check out my "Which Path to Take?" contest entry. It's Fantasy Fiction, PG and called Wyndolyn. I wanted to get some reviews on it to spiff it up some before the contest (on the 15th). I hope you don't die of boredom reading it LOL.
~Dakota
Hi I was wondering if you could review my story for the contest 'which path to take'. It's title is 'Fantasist', G, and I really need some reviews for it.
Dakota and Zanna - Is everyone doing Rosey's contest?! (I am too )
I'm on vacation right now, so your works will only be reviewed on the 23th, that's when I get back. I'm so sorry, it's just that I'm on a microscopic laptop and the net is limited and controlled by my sister, despise being really slow. Sorry the review won't be there before the deadline
Piglet: How do you spell love? Pooh: You don't spell it. You feel it.
very nice. i love the way it flows and the way you were inspired to do it by Yiruma. this is a very well written poem and you used excellent dicriptive words
this is a very well written poem. i liked it! the way the words flowed was excellent, as were the discriptive words. Yiruma would have liked the way you were inspired by his wonderful song. i'm trying to make this as long as possible because i need points. did you write this poem on the spot, for YWS, or just because you felt like it one awesomely random day? i like to write poems in my free time. very fun. by the way, i'll give you a word of advise. sometimes in life, you dont always get what you want and others do. even if you've been working toward it and they haven't. well, my song is on! Viva la Vida! happy poem writing!
The Best way to see the future is to create it.If you want to be happy, be. Life if not about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain.
Hi Kat! *slobbers on* I was wondering if you would review my submissions to this storybook I'm writing in. I know that you can't post it on the forum itself, but maybe you could PM it to me? I was wondering if that would work, but if you can't, or don't want to, that is 100% okie-dokie with me. (seriously, I wouldn't say it if it wasn't true!:D) Here it is just in case. It's called Instinct.
Don' worry about tearing it up, I just want to know what you think of the quality of the writing. (And I wouldn't ask you to read what everybody else wrote, either.)
"You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because you're all the same."
I have a piece in Fantasy Fiction that I'd like more input on. It's called My Blood, My Truth, so if you have time, it would be awesome if you could check it out!
Ok, so pinkangle you're done! KJ, it will take a little while because this week is back to school so I might be a bit full of work. Tim, yours gonna take longer, since it's a handful of work xD
So, I'm putting this thread on CLOSED, until I can manage to get reviews requested. ;D
Piglet: How do you spell love? Pooh: You don't spell it. You feel it.
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