I really like the reviews I've received from you, I was hoping you could review the second draft of this first villanelle I wrote — Last walk (2nd draft)
I don't need anything too detailed , just some main pointers for a next draft. I'm just trying to perfect the work since editing is my weak point.
Hi Mea! If you're accepting review requests, I'd be really grateful if you could review my short story Thought Patterns Thank you for your time in advance.
Please review this short story/ flash fiction (depending on your definition of either one) a friend of mine has asked me to write this for her art exibit, and I really wanna iron it out for her.
I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite. — Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom
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