Hey Classy, I've set to work on a brand new novel, would you mind giving me your throughts on the Prologue? topic64453.html It's a bit like my Reg Carter book, but perhaps a little more "thriller" and "mystery" I'm hopingm a bit like Gregg Iles if you've ever had the chance to read his books. Thanks, Ben.
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
I've been kinda awol lately what with school and stuff, but I'm back in YWS world now. I've used the spare time that I now have in abundance to go back and completely revamp my whole story [well, when I say story I mean the 10 chapters that I already posted]. I'd be super dooper greatful if you could check out the changes I've made and give me your honest opinion on them. Take as long as you need though, no rush
"Do you know what my heart says now? It says that I should forget about politics and be with you. No matter what. You're a true Queen, a Queen any King would kill for." - Prince Francis ♕
If I can return the favour any time I'll be glad to xx
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