Young Writers Society

Half of it done Afeefah!

Hey classy, it's me again I've finally got over my writer's block and have went back and re-written my previous chapters and have now posted up chapter 8. Hope you can take a look at it when you can and give me your opinion on the improvements. Thanks so much x

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56650.html chapter 8

*coco

All done coco!

I see Historical fiction isn't really your thing, but if you can, have a look at my Reg Carter novel start and tell me what you think of it. I welcome any constructive criticism and ratings, no matter how harsh!

Reg Carter: Deep Cover Chapt. 1 (Strong Language)
Reg Carter: Deep Cover Chapt. 2 (16+)

Thanks a mill!
Ben.

Hey, thanks for reviewing my first two chapters... I've got the third one if you're interested:
topic56912.html

finished just now!

Hey,

Do you mind reviewing this for me?

Revolution

Thanks.

JSPike.

All done! Thanks for the request!

Classy

topic57630.html

(^^Other fiction)

Adventures of a Traveler: A Dark World
topic57683.html

Pick it apart please?

All finished! Thanks for the requests everyone.

Classy

Hey Classy!

You've reviewed my story before but I sort of deleted that one and posted another. It's under romantice fiction and labled Triston's proposal. It would be really great if you could review it. Take your time

~Molly

Hey classy, it's me again I really appreciated your review especially the link you put up called The Hero's Journey - although it did make me quite nervous to write my next chapter because I realised I hadn't really put some drama in and I felt quite pressurised to do so. Anyway, It's been difficult but I've finally put up chapter 9, so I hope you can take a look at it when you can and give me your opinion on whether it's enough, if it's not I may stop. Anyway,, thanks so much x

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56650.html chapter 8

*coco

All done, everyone.

By the way, coco, I already reviewed chapter 8, so I moved on to chapter 9.

Hihi! Can I have a review on this : post650953.html#p650953 ?
It's a short story (kinda a memoir, I guess) called Small Steps

All done Flute!