Published October 31, 2008
In the valley of shadows
Below the blood red moon
There lurks a monstrous presence
Not to leave us soon
Many stray across it's path
Never to return to home
Many lose their way in wander
Never back to come
Who will save us from it's wicked
Wicked ways and means
Will it be our elder?
Or our young and cowardly teens?
None of them can free us
From the horror hidden deep
What misdeed brought it to us?
How into our land did it seep?
In the valley of darkness
Below the blood red moon
There lurks a menacing being
Not to leave us soon
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