Esme's point of view...
We were sitting in a very dark room, the only light was the very dimmed lamp. Carlisle held my hand and gave me a hopeful look I smiled at him.The woman walked in, trailing behind her was a little girl.I looked down and smiled at her, she hid her face in the womans skirt. "Okay here are the papers, once you get those signed she's legally yours."The woman said, she pushed the papers towards us with a pen. Carlisle signed them and I did the same. "Okay, well now that those are signed lets get everything packed.Isabella go say bye to everyone make it quick though sweetie
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