Published April 28, 2009
Below, mirrors drift,
Crystalline to emphasize paradise,
Truly adapted like primrose bum wine,
Unlike 447BC which reticulated paradise,
Dresden bridge dissected,
Rendered metallic mirrors,
Malaysia below, consequently eliminated,
Like cacophonous amphibious vehicles,
Cackling again,
Smashing splintered white glass above the sun,
'Til synthesized wheels adapted to conceptualized keys.
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