RINGTONE OF MY HEART
Melvin Banggollay
Ring tone of my heart
has rhythm of thy name.
Downloaded from smart
from the time you came.
smiling with sweetest art
while you talk so tamed,
as we danced so smart
In that night full of fame
until we have to depart
after your birthday's game.
From that time I had seen
Your beauty so serene,
My heart keeps on ringing
In silent mode vibrating.
Even I really tried to divert,
It's beating always alert
To beep love deep inside.
No matter how I tried to hide
and erase it from the start,
But my love never depart.
I tried to change the setting
But still it keep on ringing;
Security code so truly locked
That only your love can unlock.
Send me then even in text
your reply that truly reflects
the passion of your heart
to re-charge my broken heart.
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