and yes, i do dedictate my rewritten version to the current guy i have a crush on. he's the guy i used to base this song off of :] (and I know there's a part in it that isn't rewritten at all but the words work so well with what i'm trying to say here so i just left them as they are. you'll see what i'm talking about when you get there.) ** - Chuck Bass - bad character on TV show "Gossip Girl" **** - the "team" i'm talking about is our swim team, just to clarify.
You said the way I'm such a klutz
Is always putting you in a rut
I said, "That's not much."
Just a boy who swims really fast
A friend who tends to act like that Chuck Bass **
Never got to ask
I was sad I never saw him
All summer long
And then the time I turned around to find
I was the one who'd gone
But when you think Taylor Swift
I hope you find your feelings shift
As you remember my favorite song
And we'll finally be together
When you need happiness
I hope you think of my summer dress
Think of my hugs are the best
And then you start to smile
When you think Taylor Swift
I hope you think of me
August saw a month of fears
And thinking soon we'd both be here
Reunited now
But buried deep in your desk drawer
Is the note with my phone number
You never called
It's hard not to find it all
A little bittersweet
And lookin' back on all of that
It's nice to believe
When you think Taylor Swift
I hope you find your feelings shift
As you remember my favorite song
And we'll finally be together
When you need happiness
I hope you think of my summer dress
Think of my hugs are the best
And then you start to smile
When you think Taylor Swift
I hope you think of me
And I'm back on the team now for good ****
I see you everyday
And you left a voicemail on my phone
So I'll call you back and say
That do you think Taylor Swift?
Does she remind you of me at my best?
And when you put her CD on
I hope it reminds you of that face
That gives you happiness
Whenever you think my summer dress
Think of my hugs are the best
And then you start to smile
When you think Taylor Swift
I hope you think of me
Oh, think of me, mmm
You said the way I'm such a klutz
Is always putting you in a rut
I said, "That's not much."
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