Published April 25, 2008
Golden Day
Black Night
Black night will make him pay
It will surely give him fright
Golden Day
Black Night
Under bright sky
The boy flies a kite
Under dark sky he may die
Until he lives again in the light
Happiness is a warm sun
For the boy lives in fun,
During the golden day
Before he dies, when the day is done.
Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
141,733 Literary Works • 675,641 Reviews
