this goes to the beat of Suffocate by JHoliday
[intro]
Now even though you come beckon me
with all ya bling and jewelry
I aint gone be running back to you
(pause)
ew.
[verse one]
Now from your lips back up back your eyes
I can tell your double sided.
now I aint commin back to you
(pause)
Ew.
million dollar bling
(and I)
I don't give a thing
(and I)
about -you- [hold it two beats]
And when ya hands up in my face
flirtin like a freakin game
I just wana scream at
you [hold for two beats while going down]
[chorus]
cause I a livin breathin you babe
I a livin breathin you baby
[verse two]
I'll love you to the end
(and I)
but I got my life
(to die)
And I don't got no time for you
[chorus]
cause I a livin beathin you babe
A livin breathin you baby
[verse three]
I aint no freakin doll
I got my heart and all
So don't you come messin with -me-[echo]
I know its short. I might add on later.
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