Hey there!
It's really a lovely poem that you have written here. The imagery is excellent. Each of your lines convey such strong feelings when read carefully. I could really imagine a rose in my mind with the exact details that you were giving. Amazing work while describing the little details about it's fading colors .
You chose your words very wisely that created a good impact.
since the promise for more remains.
This ending line gives a great closure to the poem by offering hope and encouragement. Flowers grow, blossom, wilt, and die. Their beauty is only temporary, they eventually disappear and are replaced with new ones.
I liked the structure of the poem. It was nice that you just used minimum punctuation and ended with full stop in the very last sentence. It helped to maintain the flow while reading and made it look like a train of thoughts.
Your writing style is truly unique and I loved it.
Keep writing! <3
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