Published August 5, 2008
I sit on the grassy Golgotha
thinking of the red ant
Watching her graze me with her shapely jaw
I suspect daylight treachery, the way she searches my elbow.
panic strikes her as her food grinds her into
primordial ooze and loose spirit
Oldie but goodie
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