This is a song written by our Bass player. We called it "take it away John" mainly because it only has 4 verses, then a guitar solo, and then this wicked drum and bass solo.
Boy you've got some nerve to play,
your hogging all the action.
As it goes I'm sure you'll say,
Take it away, John, take it away.
So I know we had some fun,
surely you can tell.
Why is it you made me come?
After all this is a one man show.
It's my turn to show now,
come into my lair.
I'll keep you here till my work is done
then you can go wherever.
Tell no-one of what you heard
or our reputations ruined.
Has it crossed your tiny mind
John can play it wilder.
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