Ok, I personnaly wrote this one, so blame me if you think it suks
Vengeance of a Lunitic
A happy memory,
Is yet too far to see,
Don't you think it could be,
Far greater than it is?
Just thinking of your name,
Will never be the same,
To you it's just a game,
but for me it's all far too real.
I'm just too sick and tired,
My sanity is still trying to reveal itself (manic laughter),
I know I've gone slightly mad,
And the rope still sways from side to side.
(super ultra-sonic guitar solo)
I'm still too sick and tired,
My sanity has revealed itself,
Madness will be my ally,
And the rope has snapped in two,
And I'm just fine.
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