This is just something i wrote one day in chemistry.... Hope you like it, it reads like both a story and a poem so have fun!!!
The day started off just like any other days before it.
Things come an go but i stay the same, if things are functioning well then i am never in pain.
Except when she comes from outside, for the short period of time, bringing me gifts so that i can thrive.
For those few seconds i am perfectly content, but when she leaves i can't help but to be bent.
I have never spoke to her, just excepted the gifts.
But from today on i will try to stray adrift.
When she comes back from a long days work, i will reward her with one of my corky smirks.
That will send her the message i want her to receive, not just for me but also for the others to see.
There she is after all this time, speeding along the all but narrow drive.
She is almost in range, which can be a little strange, since it wasn't soon enough. Because i was enraged.
She stopped at the station, and went inside.
Not coming out, like she had something to hide.
I wanted so desperately to go inside, but soon enough she hit rewind.
She sped out of the open space, leaving a wake in her haste.
I never got to speak to her on that fateful night... But don't be to grim, i will try again. [/b]
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