Published January 22, 2012
Busy Ms. Bag was starting to sag, so she got very angry and was starting to nag!
All of her nagging because of her sagging made all of her friends think she was ragging.
She went to the Doctor, she went to the Nurse and they said her condition couldn't get worse!
Ms.Bag was furious, she had nothing to say..
So instead she made sure that others would pay!
Busy Ms.Bag just sat and cried, as if the sag wern't enough - her hair was fried!!
Poor Ms.Bag, She looked soiled and worn, Like a grocery bag all crinkled and torn.
What more could she do besides mope and nag?
So that's what she did! That busy Ms. Bag.
This poem is about my Mother LOL.
please no criticism about punctuation, this is how I choose to write. thanks and enjoy!!
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