Hello! I didn't notice anything that isn't already in the review below. . So I'll just tell you how much I like it. . It's a really deep poem, and I really like that. It speaks so many things.
"Thus goes the Song of the Earth,
Man rises, takes a few steps, falls to dust,
And the wheel of time turns again.
All the cosmos is but a spark from a flame,
And I learned far more from one spark
Than all my measly decades of study.
Let us dance of the edge of the world,
On the dying ember of this Earth!"
I have to say, this is my favorite line. Keep writing!
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