Published January 24, 2012
Stay here, stranger
you are tired in your home
of your home
until it is home no more
rest easy-but do not sleep
the night blanket here to comfort you
remember home
as it was-
the warming fire is exhausted
still, stay here man
scatter the trailing ashes
that are left but always returned to.
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