Young Writers Society

Hi! I'm here for a quick review!

I really liked the plot of this work. It's intriguing, and seems real though I know it's not. It's convincing. I like the way you portray it as a talk on TV, and not as what is going on in the protagonist's mind.

I found only one aspect you could consider changing, and they're probably just typos. In the first paragraph, you say 'scientist'. I think it would make more sense if you changed them to 'scientists'.

Overall, this was a great work. I see that you're pretty inactive right now, but if you come back, and read this review, I hope you continue this story.

Keep Writing!

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),

Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!

First Impression: Soo..this was a neat little start here to this story....we've got what appears to be a pretty pressing matter for the people of Earth going on right there...aaand well it certainly is the type of first part that's get a reader's attention pretty quickly here.

Anyway let's get right to it,

“The Earth has been here for a billion years. We all know that what is created can be destroyed and that's what's starting to happen. Scientist believe that the Universe was created with a massive explosion of a star. This they refer to as the Big Bang Theory. Over the past 50+ years scientist have recorded the temperatures of the earth. Their research has found that the world is getting hotter and they guessed it was caused by the people and they called this “Global Warming”. That is not the case, we have evidence that proves this.”

“The world has been heating over the past years and this year alone has been hotter than the past 40 before it. This we confirmed is not because of Global Warming. I will let our lead scientist Dave Moore step up to the stand to give you the details.” said Daniel Gregory. Dave Moore approached the microphone and began to talk.

“Thank you Daniel. Now we have all learned in Science back when we were in elementary that it takes 365 days for the earth to travel around the sun. The past 4 years we have noticed that the Earth is actually traveling around the sun in 289 days. The reason for the heat is not because of Global Warming, it is because the sun is pulling us in.” said Dave Moore with sadness. The crowd was nearly silent, many knew what this meant. The Earth itself was coming to an end. Sooner or later the earth and everything in it will be turned to ash.

“What does this mean for the people and the Earth?” asked a news reporter from the crowd. “We cannot be sure at the moment but this is evidence that the Earth will crash into the sun. We have estimated that the Earth will reach the sun in approximately 4 years, 7 months, and 24 days.” replied Dave Moore. I turned the TV off, I couldn't listen to another word of it. I knew it was true, I could feel it in the air. It was 103 degrees outside in the middle of November. In Texas, that's a big deal. This is something I never wanted to know. It's like knowing when you're going to die, the second it will happen.

Hey Treaver!

This short story you have here could serve well as a feature.

The overall story is pretty interesting, and there is alot you could do with it. Focusing your story on either a small group of people, on a global scale or maybe even just one person.

The end of the world opens up alot of conflict, chaos and story. Alot to write about.
Your grammar is very good as is your structure.

There are, however, a few things you would need to work in if you continue this.
There is little to no characters. Of course this is only a small portion of a press conference.
We have no idea of which direction this story is going. It's a pretty interesting setup, so I hope I'll see this continued.

artsy went over your phrasing and build, so I'll just end with saying you should give this one a go.

Cheers
Birkhoff

I can see this as something I would be following on here. I like where you're going with this. Just some stuff to point out.

“The Earth has been here for a billion years. We all know that what is created can be destroyed and that's what's starting to happen. Scientist believe that the Universe was created with a massive explosion of a star. This they refer to as the Big Bang Theory. Over the past 50+ years scientist have recorded the temperatures of the earth. Their research has found that the world is getting hotter and they guessed it was caused by the people and they called this “Global Warming”. That is not the case, we have evidence that proves this.”

Their research has found that the world is getting hotter and they guessed it was caused by the people and they called this “Global Warming”.

...said Daniel Gregory.

...our lead scientist Dave Moore step up to the stand to give you the details.”

“We cannot be sure at the moment but this is evidence that the Earth will crash into the sun. We have estimated that the Earth will reach the sun in approximately 4 years, 7 months, and 24 days.”

This is something I never wanted to know. It's like knowing when you're going to die, the second it will happen.