Published February 8, 2009
At the moment it's not enough to make a forty-five minute script, but I was just messing around with the idea, characters and technique. Any feedback would be highly appreciated. I hope I'm allowed to post it as a PDF as formatting the whole thing on here would be near impossible. Note that the script features heavy language at the start of the script and is quite violent.
http://SplitSecond.fileave.com/Premonition%20-%20Prolouge.pdf
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