This world is a game! win it or loose it

I'm here to review your work. Though in a small content you've successfully presented a broad idea trough a single sentence.
The challenge of the world compared to a "black hole that can swallow you in seconds" is quite creative and makes me visualize it.
According to your work, almost all of this world is "spoiled" and the few that refuse to follow the crowd remains in "isolation". Hope that's what you meant. It's seemingly contradictory but when carefully analysed its the truth, which I believe is a paradoxical statement.
I agree with Casanova in the previous review about the first part missing an "a" before the word "black hole" and also about the tense not being the same.
It might have been more relevant if you had used some other topic which would match the idea a bit more. It's your choice anyway. Apart from that I truly loved this!
Hope you keep your good work going. You did a great job!

Heya, ShavangiPandey! This is Casanova here for a review!

Anyway, to start off with, I would like to say I like this. I mean, it is just once sentence(and a run on), but holds a lot. To the review, I guess!

The first thing I noticed was that the first part of the sentence is missing something.
"This world is a challenge and resembles black hole..." This sentence should contained an,"a," between,"resembles," and,"black." For grammar purposes and flow reasons you may want to add this, it does come off as odd when I read it without it.

Before I continue, I would like to welcome you YoungWriterssociety! Hope you like it, and hope you have fun!

The next thing is-
Your tense is present tense until the latter portion of the sentence. I'd suggest changed,"started," and,"spoiled," to,"start," and,"spoil." This makes it flow better and evens up the tenses that seem strewn.

Anyway, the next thing is is that you could probably restructure this where it makes more than one sentence- when I tried to read this at a regular pace I almost ran out of breath. It's too long, and seems like a run on. My idea would be this-

This world is a challenge. It resembles a black hole that call swallow you in seconds the moment you start paying attention to the spoiled; in fear of getting thrown into isolation. Punctuation, punctuation, punctuation. This always helps, especially in flow. Flow is a very precious thing. In my opinion, it can make or break a work. A bad flow will make it seem like the work is bad, a good flow makes it seem better. From there, the content decided the rest.

One thing I don't fully understand it the,"game," part of the title. This seems a lot more serious than a game, and I'm sure you'd agree with that. This is far from a game, and leads me to wonder why the title was added.

Another thing I noticed was this- why the random,"WORLD," at the top, and what's the point in the capitalization?

Anyway, I hope this helped, and be free to message me anytime for advice, or just to talk!

Keep on doing what you're doing, and keep on keeping on!

Sincerely, Matthew Casanova Aaron.