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Our Journey

by Rasi


This is a poem I wrote that was published... through a contest I entered... just wanted to know what you guys thought of it!??!



Our Journey

Life is a journey, its road is split.
You can choose the path of entanglement,
or the cleared path of fun,
but sometimes the right shall come undone.

Sometimes we see wrong as right,
but even so, we must choose our path
to be either dark or light.
Our hearts will scream as we make our decision,
and hear them laugh above us
at our heart's division.

Life is a journey, its road is split.
Sometimes we choose darkness,
but like moths, return to the light.

Let us choose to follow the light,
and He will show us what is right!


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