Hey there!
I just finished reading your poem and I have to say, it's amazing! The emotions are pouring out of every word you wrote. You really have a talent for poetry.
One of my favorite parts of your poem is when you say, "I understand my thorns. They keep me safe." That line really got me because it shows that even though you may have a tough exterior, it's for your own protection. You're not afraid to be who you are, and that's something to be admired.
Another part of your poem that I really loved was when you said, "I say the unsaid. True things shouldn’t just be erased." That's so true! It's important to speak up about the things that matter to you, even if they're uncomfortable or unpopular.
I also love how you use the metaphor of a rose. It's such a beautiful flower, but it also has thorns to protect itself. A rose is both beautiful and strong.
Overall: I think your poem is inspiring and uplifting. You show that even when things are tough, you can still grow and become something amazing. Keep writing! Your words have the power to touch so many people. I loved it!
This poem reminded me of a story I wrote, it's called: Broken mirror image
If you have time, be sure to check it out!
- Rinisha
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