Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
So I was in this riot one time, wheather or not i was participating, or just watching, you'll have to decide later, right now though, i'm busy telling a story. These guys tipped this news van over, and were trying to make it explode. they tried various things, shooting at it with different guns, beating it with a sledge, lighting the engine block on fire, it wasn't really working, the engine block got really clean though. Eventually they ended up shoving a shirt down the fuel line and lighting it on fire. Man what an explosion. Three weeks later they found a liscnese plate burried in rooftop asphalt 4 blocks away.
Anyway, the riot would never had have happened if fox had just kept that freaking reality show from ever existing.
Okayyy...well this is an interesting start here. The narrator especially has a very interesting flair to them with their personality and I can't decide if I like it or not. Either way it is interesting. And of course this little description of a riot is quite nicely done too, I think this is meant to dip into the humor area perhaps given its a bit over the top, but I am liking it so far, and it doing a good job getting our attention as readers.
So it starts like this. Fox needed a new reality show to fill their weekday block, from 4-10 in the evening. They finally got the right idea and were going to replace each and everyone of their dumbass television shows, but it was a good plan poorly executed when they picked up this particular plot.
Alright we have ourselves a slight change of tone here to a somewhat more rantlike quality here. That's certainly an interesting shift there but it does make it no less entertaining although I would now suggest a tiny bit more detail in this case instead of going 100% just rant.
It involved three swedish female midgets (all between the hights of 3 ft and 3 ft 9) bikinis, leighterhozen, and one hundred and fourty two batchelorettes disguised as men from 20 years from now, when in fact they are from the year 1924. It was all going well, until the fourteenth season
OKay that seems like a setup for more things to come there. I do like to see that, it makes you want to keep reading, and well this combination you suggest there is just about ridiculous enough to make you curious so decent job there...although I would attempt to settle on a mid range tone there between the ranty nature of the second paragraph and the more exaggerated humor like style of the other two.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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