Published April 13, 2005
I'm sitting in class
Writing this down
Waiting for Seth
To start his presentation.
He's handed out papers
And is just sitting wuietly,
Does he expect us to read what he gave us?
Now he's looking around
Op! Now he's started,
He has the most mundaine speaking voice ever.
He's kinda like me,
Stumbling over his speach,
Man, I am not looking forward to this.
I have to give one too
This oral presentation
Mine will be over Ghandi.
Now I'll be random,
Making different statements.
Because I'm cool like that.
Love is like
A bycicle.
Those who dont have it,
Want yours.
Love is like
An aligator.
I don't know how,
It just is.
Faith or religion is like
Stars.
There are a lot of them,
And they have varrying numbers of planets,
But in the end,
They're all the same.
People are like
Crocodiles.
We both have teeth.
Some fish fly,
Some fish walk,
But most of them
Are just dinner.
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__por___tion
is br_____ought
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Alergies suck,
I just decided.
Thank you for
Reading
My crappy Peom
Alms for me?
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Very clever, and so many so very true observations.
Totally funny, man.
That was funny. I like the love/bycycle thing. Great
I completely agree with riababy about religion..
I liked how it was so drifty too. The poem that is, not the religion..
Truer words were never spoken. And the love is like a bicycle thing made me laugh. Also, for some reason, I like how you deliberately had spelling mistakes, like it was a little kid who's just randomly drifting off in class. So awesome. You own.
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyy! Thats really good. WRITE MORE!!
~Lollipop and her good friend Flik~
Love is like
A bycicle.
Those who dont have it,
Want yours.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! This makes me laugh, darling. And it's no wonder why, it's SO true! The second you're unavailible you're the apple of everyone's eye.
Good work. More randomness!!