Published January 15, 2009
Hey I attached the story. Please Please Please Review!
A quick summary about what the story will be about is;;
Two people with a really strong bond. (not lovers but really close friends) and they get in a big fight. A couple days after the fight, one of them is at risk of dying. The draft is up til the point of the fight. Check it out and review =P-
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