Hiya, LordStar! Another quick one.
This was a good chapter. Switching the POV to Ethan gives us a nice change of pace, especially given that Ethan's goals are a lot more concrete - though still complicated. I love the dilemma that's emerging. I can understand why Ethan would be so reluctant to let Rhys be sectioned, but I also think that there's nothing Ethan can do at this point. He can't spend his whole life keeping Rhys from the brink of destruction. And I don't know if it will help Rhys in the long run.
I would be incredibly interested to see what would happen if Rhys was admitted to a psych ward, both for the experience of seeing Rhys in a new environment and for the impact it would have on his and Ethan's relationship. Seeing Rhys reconcile (or not) with the betrayal could be an interesting development for his character. I'm also really interested to find out what happened with their mother. Their dad is dead, as far as I remember? I wonder if the mother left before or after that happened.
I do wonder if there's more to Ethan's protectiveness of Rhys. Is it just due to whatever happened to their mother, and because he genuinely thinks that Rhys wouldn't manage without him? Or is there a part of him that likes to be responsible for Rhys? I don't know. It just seems odd to me that Ethan is so resistant to the idea of Rhys going onto a ward, even if just for a few days. It's an oddly possessive way to behave - if he's worried about how Rhys would feel about it, you'd think he'd discuss it with him, rather than flat-out refusing on his behalf. Still, without knowing what happened with their mother, it's hard for me to judge Ethan's motivations.
I think that's all the comments I've got for this chapter. It was good to read, and you captured the mix of exhaustion and worry that comes with being a relative of someone with chronic mental health struggles. He plainly cares about his brother, but you can tell it's wearing him down to take responsibility all the time. I'm looking forward to seeing what comes of this.
Keep writing!
~Pan
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