Published July 30, 2010
Roller Coaster (A Dynamite by Taio Cruz Parody)
Verse 1:
I came to ride, ride, ride, ride,
I got there early so
I could slide, slide, slide, slide,
So I could get right through the line, line, line, line
Then I get the spot that's mine, mine, mine, mine
Yeah, yeah.
And then we go, we go, we go,
And it goes, it goes, it goes,
Chorus:
I put my hands up when I'm on this ride,
Screaming "Aaa-ah
Gotta throw up."
The downward plunge makes my stomach cry,
Screaming "Aaa-ah
Gotta throw up."
Cause we gonna turn which way,
We gonna flip all night,
Our heads will explode,
It's a roller coaster,
Cause I told you once,
That this ride is fierce,
Our heads will explode,
It's a roller coaster.
Verse 2:
I sorta feel, feel, feel, feeel,
Like I'm gonna puke my meal, meal, meal, meal,
I really don't want to, to, to, to,
But I lean over and do, do, do, do,
Yeah, Yeah,
And we still go, we go, we go,
And it goes, it goes, it goes,
Chorus:
I put my hands up when I'm on this ride,
Screaming "Aaa-ah
Gotta throw up."
The downward plunge makes my stomach cry,
Screaming "Aaa-ah
Gotta throw up."
Cause we gonna turn which way,
We gonna flip all night,
Our heads will explode,
It's a roller coaster,
Cause I told you once,
That this ride is fierce,
Our heads will explode,
It's a roller coaster.
Bridge:
Even though I feel sick,
And I don't feel quite like standing,
I love this coaster,
And I don't want it to be landing,
Cause I, I, I, feel free
And I, I, I, love to be,
Love to be,
So I'm gonna keep my hands in the air,
My hands in the air,
Put your hands in the air.
Chorus:
I put my hands up when I'm on this ride,
Screaming "Aaa-ah
Gotta throw up."
The downward plunge makes my stomach cry,
Screaming "Aaa-ah
Gotta throw up."
Cause we gonna turn which way,
We gonna flip all night,
Our heads will explode,
It's a roller coaster,
Cause I told you once,
That this ride is fierce,
Our heads will explode,
It's a roller coaster.
It's a roller coaster
Hoped you liked it!!! 
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I really liked this. It made me smile, I dont know how to review parodies so I'm just going to leave it at that.
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That part was hilarious. I like this a lot! It's cute and funny. *clicks "like" button over and over again then sees "error." *
~Lady purple.
Bravo Bravo! *Clap Clap Clap*
I laughed at this so hard! I even tried singing to the real song and it's HA-larious!
Keep making more songs please, then maybe you should record them, then I'd download them onto my I-POD =]
i laughed so hard at this LOL!
Hey! This was a really fantastic parody! I love this song and I think that the concept went with it very well.
Any who, a couple of things...
The line "it's a roller coaster", has one too many syllables, I think. I know allmixedup gave you an idea, but I thought I would share one too. I would change it to just "it's a coaster ride" or take out the "it's" and make it just "roller coaster ride". That way the song wouldn't feel forced and would floooow.
I would go back again and read-through it once because a couple lines (in the verses) have one word extra or need one more word to make the rapping-ness sound right. And I don't mean with the repetitive words. I mean in the other parts of the verses. Sorry, if that didn't make sense...
My favorite lines were the beginning of the second verse with the feel/meal rhyme. And of course the AAA--aahhh lines. It made me laugh thinking of singing and rapping and then all of a sudden AHAHAAAHHHH!! Yep, fantastic job!
I liked this! I laughed so hard I got complaints from the neighbors for being so loud! And it fits with the music almost perfectly! *Hits like* Keep writing!
loool It's pretty good ! I think it's funny =)