This is the second chapter in my Story "Bruised&Broken". If u haven't read the prologue or 1st chapter, scroll to the bottom and read bottom to top. if you have, the second chapter will be the first thing you see. Its about 5 and half pages in word, so i uploaded it to my blog. much easier to read. Please read and review! and if there are any grammatical errors, please tell me, im not very good at finding those lol.
p.s. If your going to be mean about my writing, don't reply, but constructive criticism is always welcome.
link:http://aspirekatieanne.blogspot.com/
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