Hey, It's a random person here to give you a review
I liked it. I love it so much when the title ties in really good and is repeated in the poem and you did that so well!
What is it meaning when it says turn out the light?
I love the imagery it painted a wonderful picture in my head as I was reading it.
A thing punctuation. I don't think you need punctuation at the end of every line, it kinda looks awkward at some points.
Keep up the good work!
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