Hi!! I'm Lizzy! It's a pleasure to read your work!
Although I very much unironically clicked the 'chicken' tab within the genre section, I had nooo idea what I was going to come upon, but I don't think it would've been this lol!
I love! Despite the comically chicken side-character, this is actually quite well-written! The AB format you mostly stick to is done rather nicely, and your story flow is amazing.
There was a princess locked in a tower,
In chains for the mere act of being born,
forced all her short life to beg and cower,
treated with unjust cruelty and scorn
This one! I like this stanza specifically, i'm not quite sure why! I just enjoy the flow of the words and the descriptions you use for the princess and her struggles within the plot that you follow. This chick (mind the pun :>) is having a bad time, she's the damsel in distress, and here comes her knight in shining armor, a chicken! Not to mention a warrior chicken at that!
I would actually love to see what else you could come up with in this story, perhaps their fate together after escaping the evil grasp of the princess' stepmother. The princess and the warrior chicken could have plenty of adventures together as a team!
Haha, I liked this one, though! It's very fun! Good job!
Points: 86
Reviews: 5
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