I like how u told alot in so little lines I have a poem short too but anyway I really liked it the only comment I have is the last two lines feel incomplete I think you shuld add alitlle bit more too it other then that its perfect
Keep writing ill like to see more pieces by you ur a gud writer unlike myself lol but if u hav a chance ill like ur input ony poems wait and see and where were you . Can u plz review it I feel like its not all the way there plz give me feed bac I need confidence so I can post more I hav alot but little points and reviews but enough about me .
-oldsoulxoxo
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