Hello CoffeeCat, Megan17 with a review .
I love this piece! It was so captivating, and the imagery was amazing. I really liked the way you set up your poem too. It made it so much easier to see when a knew stanza was starting. The rhyming was very good too. Sometimes the rhymes can feel forced, or insufficient, but that was not the case at all. It flowed very nicely, and overall the poem was wonderful. I hope you continue writing, and I look forward to reading more of your work!
-Megan17
Points: 217
Reviews: 12
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